Hope springs - A Poetic Practice

Emotions of hope springs like flowing waters like the suns rays giving warmth from the rings of fires burning brightly.

Each moments thoughts come and go like ebbs aglow for each heart beat another seed grow tall and never left fallow.

Moments in time spent greatly while never assuming good things will just come spritely holding onto time mightily.

Even as the leaves do seem to fall we all try our hardest to recall these each tick off the clock hands on your minds wall.

Lines on the river we each take our allotted space in each of existence wake these moments to they touch our life's lake coming memories we take.



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Beautiful verses!

If I understood (interpret) it correctly, we do have to use our time wisely and cherish the memories while we can and take control of how we live and make the most of the life we've been given :)

I'm going to share this on LeoThreads and I hope you would check it out if you have time :) It's also here on Hive where we get to share random thoughts in short form, create polls even and have conversations or interact with others. Various communities around Hive is using LeoThreads which makes it even more fun 😉

!LUV

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Lines on the river we each take our allotted space in each of existence wake these moments to they touch our life's lake coming memories we take.

this really hit me, life is like a lake, full of memories.

like ifarmgirl said, poetry is great for sharing on Threads, which is like Twitter for Hive. it's super fun, and it's a great way to engage with your audience.

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Cheers man greatly appreciate you feedback and glad you found some value in my poem.

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Ephemeral temporary awareness of an apparently real world, programmed to grant us a lived existence of which so many situations are part, that mark us like a tattoo, forever...
Lovely verses that feed hungry eyes.
Thanks for sharing.
Good day.

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Much appreciated the eyes that have into the eternal void of the inner spaces working each and every single soul inside the spaceship of time and space.

Very welcome. Glad you enjoyed my poem.

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