Swirling emotions battened down. - A Poetic Practice

Often wonder about reason
Blowing up at endless people
Strange bringing home the bacon
So long you human cripple

Drum beats knocking around
Like a jungle rhythm in the head
Drowning banging beat sound
Beating distractions till dead

Shout scream cry
Blood sweat tears
Bobbing heads hair dry
Enter all listening ears

Busy bodies colliding
Kaleidoscope shapes
Eating you white riding
Superman flying capes

Isn't it odd
Dreams are not bad



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Drum beats knocking around
Like a jungle rhythm in the head

I hear it :)

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Hola @akumagai guau poema a estilo surrealista. Te confieso que al inicio me costó darle sentido para mi entendimiento, por la multiplicidad de asociaciones y elementos que a primera vista no se identifica un orden o estructura lógica. Claro al final comentas que es un sueño, pero eso es la vida múltiples eventos que ocurren al mismo, en un momento, a la misma hora, en un espacio geográfico; aproximaciones de pensamiento complejo. Me gustó y me condicionó a la interpretación. Felicidades.
Feliz semana para tí.

Hello @akumagai wow surreal style poem. I confess that at the beginning I found it hard to make sense to my understanding, by the multiplicity of associations and elements that at first glance is not identified an order or logical structure. Of course, at the end you comment that it is a dream, but that is life, multiple events that occur at the same time, at the same moment and at the same time, in a geographical space, approximations of complex thought. I liked it and it conditioned me to the interpretation. Congratulations.
Happy week to you.
Translated with www.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)

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Gracias @marilour. My thoughts while writing this poem was scattered from the restless sleep I had the night before writing, I was endevouring to capture the chaos keeping me half awake.

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