He had left

avatar


Pixabay

Years it was and I could remember his touch,
How it burns like a volcano eruption,
He has a smile that shined bright like a torch,
Which he left in my heart knowing I will miss him so much.

It all started at the beginning of the ember month,
Which brought in so much more than our thoughts,
It was supposed to be a friendly running ship,
But it turned to love or was it lust filled ship?

I could remember how the weeks spent were,
Which brought butterflies to my stomach,
It was beautiful and I love how real my smiles were,
That I even had the foolish thoughts we will both be together till eternity.

Days passed by as the emotion grew thicker,
It was so fun that our opinion never truly differs,
A big part of me was glad he was a communicator just like me,
But all came crashing down when he met the real me.

Hours it was and the conversations never ended,
We always had something to keep the connection going,
It was the start of a beautiful journey I hoped never ended,
But fate's arrival blew off the magical glow.

The agony left could be felt every minute,
Makes me wish I never met him,
But the deed has been done as my mind never kept mute,
Raging like fire cussing my heart on why it had fallen for him.

The seconds left made things worse,
Reminding me of the feelings that felt like a curse,
It burns my heart and cuts my flesh deep with a sword,
And left me hanging with each thrust.
I felt hot liquid burn my skin at reality curse,
He had left me even when my heart screamed not.

Still yours truly,
Balikis.

Thanks for reading.

Peace be unto those who crave it and more to those who chase it away.

hive-161465 writing poetry blockchainpoet creativecoin neoxian proofofbrain pain
0
0
0.000
43 comments
avatar

Congratulations @balikis95! You have completed the following achievement on the Hive blockchain and have been rewarded with new badge(s):

You published more than 80 posts.
Your next target is to reach 90 posts.

You can view your badges on your board and compare yourself to others in the Ranking
If you no longer want to receive notifications, reply to this comment with the word STOP

To support your work, I also upvoted your post!

Check out the last post from @hivebuzz:

HiveBuzz World Cup Contest - Collect badges and win prizes - 4518 HIVE prize pool
0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

I appreciate the raw honesty of this poem, @balikis95. It reminds me that I could be using poetry more often as a way to express and process my emotions and painful experiences.

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

Thanks for reading and sharing in the rawness of this.. Poetry as a way with words I suppose.

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

Raw, you said it first was thinking about the same thing. Simple and straight to the point love the poetry @balikis95

The rhymes hits perfectly

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

Thank you so much for your kind words, and for being able to understand what was written😊😊.

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

I noticed the rhyming scheme used.

It all started at the beginning of the ember month,
Which brought in so much more than our thoughts,
It was supposed to be a friendly running ship,
But it turned to love or was it lust filled ship?

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

One word: Ouch!

Totally relatable too. The technique used to convey the writer's emotions and thoughts are pretty well shown as well. I love it! Keep it up @balikis95 !

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

Relatable yeah... Emotional exhaustion can be tiring...

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

I know how hurtful it is, and you may have 1001 ways to kill him in your mind, but it shall pass. A good person will always get the message from God that you should not be with him. God is saving you from a man like him, and you will know that he is worth nothing once you move on. There is someone waiting for you, and he is lucky to have you. Sending my hugs to you, @balikis95.

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

Thanks for your message sent, I appreciate you.

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

I admire you so much for opening up about this and create a nice piece of art build from your emotions. Sometimes life has other plans for us. Emotions are beautiful, because they make us feel alive. We must embrace every shade of them.
Thank you for sharing! 💛🌻

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

Lust it can be a curse but your favourite word I think :)
How have you been mischievous?

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

😁😁.. My mischievous self is active 😉😉

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

Ahhhhhhh @balikis95 who is this man dah show you premium shege oooo... nothing consine me weda is fiction...

if you like tell others that it is fiction... taaaa... me i winno believe at all....
This breakfast strong oooo...lol

Such a wonderful piece, i enjoyed it...
You are a wonderful poet no be small
nobody shuu break your heart iheee

I waka come from dreemport

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar
(Edited)

Hehe... Mr. Waka waka an fiction ooo, na you no know wan believe😂😂.... Breakfast no de my list again... I don wash hand comot since 1906😂😂

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

Ghen ghen
The unbreakfastable mama 🙌🙌
The Great Queen of her Qweendom
I Stan and reStan, I suppose turn PakiStan 🙌🙌

Come show me way nay
Make I be like you o

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

😂😂 you be suntin else, come collect voodoo wey go make things beta for you, nobody go fit breakfast you... I suppose collect better money but as per say na you bring $8,765473.. Make we use start the voodoo preparation😆😆..

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

8 naira ba....
mad ooo
how you want am, cash, recharge card or tom tom?

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

😂😂 na your kind de make African people be like bad people.. Keep your tom tom and get baba dudu with it😂😂..

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

Hahahaha
Baba dudu
Omo!!!

I just dey remember those days ooo 😂😂😂😂
I been dey buy that thing wella 😂😂😂

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

E de sweet for belle wella😋

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

Hahaha
Does it still exist sef...
Na primary school and a bit of junior secondary school I take that thing wella... lol
no tell anybody oooo
lol

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

Hehe, bribe me not to cos I de with microphone😂😂... Not sure it still exists... Indomie generation don use Tiktok spoil everywhere.

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

🥲🥲🥲
Shey you go collect freshly minted 5 naira??? 🥲🥲

Naaaa
They don't understand at allllll

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

Minted gini?😅😅 spend your naira in peace have got to spread words all around the earth...

Sure they don't 😂😂
.

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

Haba naa
Is me you wantu do this thing to? 🤧

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

Is just small thing na... Don't worry you will be fine😁😁

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

But I trusted you 😭😭😭

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

Don't be a drama queen😒😒.. I no go too loud am no worry

0
0
0.000
Reply
avatar

🥲🥲🥲🥲

Emphasis on "too", that means you go loud am 🤦‍♂️

0
0
0.000
Reply