Illustrated short story | "A gift for the wicked"

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📷 © @beautifulwreck.

Standing on the balcony of her beauty & spa salon, Lena felt like she could almost breathe. The dainty smell of her flowers, the colors of the sky, the shadows on the distant houses. All these elements, so oblivious to the pain that they distorted her reality. Here, she was anonymous, a common stranger, your average neighbor. But she had a secret, the most dangerous one. Lena was a rebel.

Lena came from a place where ideologies could get people killed. Hell, even the amount of melanin in the eyes, hair, or skin could do that. She had lost her entire family. As the ashes fell from the tip of her cigarette, Lena remembered the little faces. Three children, no less, she had saved the day before. Five, the week before. She inhaled, and the mix of smoke and relief filled her lungs. When she exhaled, the sunset view blurred for a few seconds, as the fume lingered in the air. The sound of the door latch made Lena disperse her musings and turn around.

"Ma'am, this arrived for you on the evening mail".

One of her masseuses, the one she trusted the most, walked towards her with a letter in her hand. The moment Lena held it, an exquisite gold filigree gave away the remittent's name. At last, she had gotten what she wanted. The general had extended her a formal invitation to the Winter Solstice Gala.

"Thank you, Marie, you can go now. Please, turn the lights off and close the door on your way out." Lena's voice trembled as she tried to hide the cascade of emotions, but the girl didn't notice it. She was alone again, and her fingers traced the words on the card, relishing on the upcoming victory. Then, she hid the piece of paper under her dress and went to the attic to tell the good news to her lover.


Later that night, Lena was laying on Łukasz's chest, still panting, her cheeks blushed. He used to think so often that she was the most beautiful being in the world, and this moment was not the exception. His fingers toured the silhouette of her body, her freckles, her perfect skin. Then, she moved away to fetch a cigarette, and Łukasz let out a grievous sigh. "Must you do that every time, my dearest? Does that filthy smoke give you a better high than me?" Lena laughed at the distressed sound of his voice. "Mon chéri, you must not let your pride get wounded with so little effort!"

As she smoked, they laid on their backs, staring at the starry night through the skylight. Overwhelmed by the silence, Łukasz cleared his throat. "Lena, my love, tell me, are you ready for this?" His voice was shaky, and so were his fingers. Turning her head, Lena locked eyes with him. "I am ready. I will succeed". The ferocity in her tone left no room for doubt. Łukasz succumbed to her pull and kissed her, long and hard.


The evening of the Winter Solstice Gala had arrived. The mirror reflected an image she didn't recognize. Lena fixed a few locks of rose gold hair behind her ears and gave a little touch up to her lips. The silky texture of the dress made her gloat in anticipation, and she knew it was time. A few knocks on her door gave her the signal, and she finished scribbling some instructions. Lena headed downstairs, not without sliding first the note on Marie's pocket. There he was, GenLt Swientek. Tall, handsome, deadly. The general saluted her with a kiss on the back of the hand, and she responded with a curtsy and a flutter of eyelashes. Then, they headed to the vehicle.


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📷 © @beautifulwreck.

All night long they danced. To the other male invitees, it appeared rather unfair. The most beautiful woman at the party seemed glued to the general's arm. Lena was all smiles and her eyes glowed. Swientek was spellbound. When she whispered to his ear those words that sounded like magic, he said yes. As soon as the gala ended, they sneaked past his security guard, slid to his car, and rushed to her home.


"Swientek, could you please wait here?" Oh, the way she dragged the syllables of his name. He could die right then and there. He was sure he was already in love with this breathtaking woman. "Of course, tell me what to do and I will". His strong, raspy accent filled the room. Lena danced her way behind the ornated folding screen, humming a cheerful song. General Swientek held his breath as she began to undress, hidden to his eyes. She threw her clothes over the furniture, singing louder now. Then, a splash sound. "You can come in, my dear Swientek", she said, exaggerating the r's and the k's.

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📷 by @eveuncovered

The general approached the bathtub, and her eyes captured his glance. Those green, fierce eyes. He couldn't look anywhere else, even if he wanted to. "Aren't you going to come in? I'm waiting for you, general". Swientek took off his uniform, exposing his masculinity. She didn't back out one bit and continued to stare at him dead in the eye. He entered the milk bath she was in. Lena proceeded to sprinkle the cloudy liquid with the dried flowers she took from a silk pouch. Hundreds of them, floating on the white that surrounded Swientek and Lena. Then, and only then, she spoke again.

"This feels lovely, doesn't it? I bet it's only the beginning of what you have been imagining we'll do. Such pleasures await you, general. The same treatments you so often dispense to your prisoners of war, am I right? This, general Swientek, is your gift. A gift of justice. You will never hurt anyone again".

The man sensed a smell like poison coming from the flowers and panicked. As he tried to move, the neurotoxins had already taken control of his nervous system. Tongue-tied and paralyzed, his eyes widened and a teardrop fell through his cheek.

Lena played with a little crystal container in her hand, watching life fade away from the general's eyes. Then, she drank the content of the flask, exited the bathtub, and scrubbed her skin with a towel. "Marie, can you come and help me clean?"



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Deadly beauty! Men always fall for the honey pot. We never learn. Beauty is too hard to resist. Great story, it felt like a mystery from years past. Loved the embedded images.

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Thank you for your words of appreciation! I believe that the most captivating and beautiful feature of Lena was her inner strength, visible in her eyes. Maybe that's the mystery behind men falling for the honeypot. I'm glad you liked the images as well as the story!

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This story is very well told, with clear and effective imagery.
A super spy sneaks in through the military man's desire and defeats him with her own strength. Well written! Beautiful pictures.
Congratulations, @beautifulwreck

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Thank you, I appreciate your words! I'm glad you liked the story and the images 😊

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Thank you so much for posting this intriguing story on @theinkwell, @beautifulwreck.

We're glad when evil is vanquished.

We love reading your comments on fellow writers' posts.

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@beautifulwreck I enjoyed the story and your illustrations.

A gift of justice. You will never hurt anyone again

Sometimes a spy's justice for an evil man is the only kind to be obtained.

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I'm glad you did! It was fun writing this using the photo as a prompt, and then adding some illustrations too. Thank you for your words of appreciation!

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The first time I'm reading the story I could sense something mysterious. It lured me just like that general how he was lured in the bathtub. You told the story perfectly that it felt full of emotions.

So lovely.

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The first time I'm reading the story I could sense something mysterious.

Yay! Mission accomplished then. Lured is definitely a keyword for this plot haha I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and thank you for your words of appreciation.

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Beautiful story @beautifulwreck

As a reader we are swept away with the imagery of the gala (which made me think of Cinderella). We begin to question Lena's loyalty to Łukasz but this resolves in the final twist. I liked how this was foreshadowed in the first paragraph, as we are warned well in advance that she is a rebel.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Yes!! You got it all 😊 every bit of the story was meant to lead to that final scene. I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery as well as the plot. Thank you for your appreciation!

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Well written and interesting short story!

The way you captured every single detail is highly commendable. Good job!

I enjoyed reading it.

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I love details, they shape us and our history piece by piece.

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Hola amiga,

Creepy stuff. I wasn't looking forward to the ( end of the ) bath scene...

I love the colors and the overall look and feel of that first drawing ( reminds me of - the balcony view from - my house in Monte Frio, that I sold two months ago ) as well as the 'lighting' in the second drawing.

Also cool to see that you incorporated a picture of a fellow Hiver - @eveuncovered - in your story.

Please keep those stories ( and drawings ) coming :<)

un abrazo!

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¡Hola Vincent!

Yeah, I was in the mood for a creepy story. I hope you liked it anyway. And yes, the stunning Eve inspired this character; her energy in that particular photo is very intense and fierce. My favorite part while crafting this story was making the first illustration. Your view in Monte Frio must have been amazing!

Please keep those stories ( and drawings ) coming :<)

I will definitely do that. I'm learning how to add more colors to the drawings (and to my life).

¡Abrazos!

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Beautifully written story..
I loved the pictures too..
Nice work.

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story as well as the illustrations. I appreciate the reblog too!

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Hi,

I love the illustrations especially how you illustrate your story like you were directly painting it in my head... how easy it is to visualize the story.

I love it... Thank you, it was a good read.

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Hello! Thank you for your words of appreciation, I'm glad you enjoyed the story and the illustrations. I aimed to portray my vision of the ambiance and it's good that it worked.

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This is just excellent, @beautifulwreck! You are a fantastic writer. I love your choice of words and your distinct writing style.

I commend your main character. All it took to take down General Swientek was his sensual desires! Who has the 'real' power now? Hehe. It's a gift of justice indeed.

Well done with the imagery too. 😊

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Hello @kemmyb! Wow, thank you so much for your words of appreciation, I'm glad you enjoyed the story as well as the illustrations!

I'm all about women owning their power. One could argue if it was truly justice since we don't know Swientek's side of the story, but I believe Lena did the right thing. She might have saved many lives by compromising her own.

I appreciate your admiration and it encourages me to keep writing and illustrating. Thank you! ❤️

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Yes, yes! Keep writing and illustrating. You are so good at it. 😊

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Thank you!! I encourage you to give it a try as well, you never know how good the process and the result can be until you try. And if you ever want to collab, I'm up for it!

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I knew it! I knew it! An exquisite trap in the tradition of the most celebrated spy seductions.

Your language is subtle and effective. Your story floats across the page like the poisonous petals in the tub. You know how to write.

As for your illustrations: I am jealous. To be able to express yourself verbally and visually so well. You are fortunate.

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Hello @agmoore! Thank you so much for your words of appreciation. I'm very glad you enjoyed the story as well as the illustrations.

As for your illustrations: I am jealous. To be able to express yourself verbally and visually so well. You are fortunate.

Allow me to encourage you to give it a try! I didn't think I could do it, but then I decided to just try and see what happened. I'm glad I did!

Thank you for stopping by, your comments are always highly appreciated.

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Congratulations, @beautifulwreck. Your story has been selected for our weekly highlights magazine: https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@theinkwell/the-ink-well-highlights-magazine-30.

I do have one small change for you. "Melatonin" should be "melanin." :)

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Ohh, you're absolutely right! Can't believe I hadn't noticed it haha guess I really need to get more sleep, I've been daydreaming about the sleep hormone!

Thank you so much for your attention to detail.

I appreciate with all my heart the genuine support I've received from The Ink Well community and it's amazing to have been featured in the Weekly Highlights Magazine. Thank you, beautiful team!

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This felt like it was continued from a series of ages... Now i want to read the past ones 😩. It's so good and the images are so in sync. I wish I could draw like that...
I applaud you ❤️

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Hmm, I might consider going back into the past to know more about Lena and the others... Łukasz does seem like he could have a lot more to tell. Thank you for this! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story as well as the illustrations. And I encourage you to give drawing a try! It's all about enjoying the process and practicing, believe it or not.

Thank you for stopping by ❤️

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Alright. I'll take your word for it.

I'm glad I did...

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Awesome, this story kept me on edge until the last minute :) I can't wait to see your next story ❤️

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