ZapFic - A 50 Word Short Story
You can find the original post here to find the contest rules and see other great stories listed in the replies section. Today's prompt is: SHAME
Splayed legs, hands against the wall. Hot breath on my neck as dirty hands searched my body for contraband. Subjected to this as the visitor I ache for what my son must go through on the other side of these bars. Putting on my shoes, I prepare for our visit.
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I felt the mother's pain and love
Thanks @kaerpediem. I actually have visited my son in prison, although I wasn't subjected to quite that physical torture, it felt like it.
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I was imagining if this was me... and you didn't even need to imagine <33
Thanks for the hugs! And I'm glad you've not had to experience it in real life, it's kind of a life-altering experience
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Yikes. So much food for thought packed into this little space... well done!
Thank you @deeanndmathews. I like the challenge of saying something with a minimum of words, I'm glad the message came across!
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A complite story in just few words, I like this way of wriring. Good story.
Thank you. Im not so good at english as I want, but I will do my best.
Cheers.
@urbanog, thanks for the comment, glad you liked the story. Hang in there with writing, practice is a good thing. Your English is coming along great, I think I'd struggle with learning a new one!
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