Letras propias 190: "La habitación roja", por bonzopoe [poesía]
(Edited)
Fuente
La habitación roja
después de recorrer el océano
y colapsa, desfallece en una
última demostración de fuerza.
Muere al cumplir su cometido,
como el salmón que después de llegar río arriba
y reproducirse pinta de rojo las aguas
en una última demostración de su existencia.
después de haber recorrido el largo camino
de la reconciliación, del perdón,
de conseguir el valor suficiente
para intentarlo de nuevo un día más,
una semana más, un mes más,
un año más, una vida más
o lo que el destino disponga.
de dejar morir lo que fuimos
para nacer de nuevo.
Llegamos río arriba y solo queda
abandonarnos a la corriente
y aceptar a donde nos lleve.
de tocarnos, de aceptarnos,
vemos que no hay estruendo golpeando la orilla,
solo simulación, que no nos quedan fuerzas,
que nuestra mutua traición las mató,
que hemos perecido antes de poder nadar,
y ahora solo somos un par de cuerpos muertos
que flotan a la deriva pintando de rojo la habitación.
Si llegaste hasta acá muchas gracias por leer este publicación y dedicarme un momento de tu tiempo. Hasta la próxima y recuerda que se vale dejar comentarios.
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Me pareció intenso, y las comparaciones son estupendas. Las poesías que te hacen leerlas dos veces para disfrutarlas son muy buenas piezas y esta encaja en esa descripción. Saludos, amigo.
Muchas gracias amigo, la verdad es que tenia mis dudas sobre el poema pero a veces es difícil ser objetivo con tu propio trabajo. Que bueno que te haya gustado. Saludos
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Me encantó y la verdad no esperaba ese final. Quedó genial
¡Muchas gracias! Que bueno que te haya gustado. Saludos desde México.