RE: WHEN THE MENTAL DIARRHEA TAKES ITS WRITTEN FORM

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Thanks for this positive feedback. 😀Writing this kind of stuff from time to time has a relaxing effect on me. Years ago, before discovering Steemit and Hive, I was writing these absurd ramblings and fantasies every day on Facebook. Sometimes I was triggered by events and news shown in the media, but more often the thoughts were disconnected from that part of reality. It was much easier because I was writing in my native language then. Only last night it felt relatively easy and natural to write this kind of stuff in English. 🙂I'm very happy that someone finds it entertaining, so I'm feeling invited to post similar ramblings from time to time.



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This reads like a native English speaker's writing, so kudos on becoming fluent in another language! There is only one small bit of usage that stands out as nonnative: "stop them to dance" would be "stop them from dancing". I'm not sure that it is ungrammatical, but the latter is how it would be said. Just helping for next time. :)

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Thanks 🙂I appreciate the suggestion.

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