Mayki Encounter(the puzzle)

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Mayki was thinking how he blinked. Decades gone so quickly said Mayki. Everything happened in the blink of an eye, the happy moments and the sad moments. To this moment back to his childhood age, Mayki was thinking as his voice was loud in the quiet and lonely forest.
Truth, as a voice replied him in the forest. Life cursed us and make us think we are walking in no direction. Mayki was confused, it seems the forest was speaking to him.
The stranger asked Mayki, what do you understand by Life?
Mayki replied, this is Life. And there was a loud echoe in the forest.
The strange voice continued as the echoe vanished.
Mayki was confused in the present of the strange voice, it looks like a puzzle in his eyes. Mayki said, I will love to change this conversation into a different topic.
Oh, the strange voice replied as a snap of finger was heard in the forest. How about this, the strange voice replied.
Mayki found himself in another realm.
He was in a body of a child now, he saw beautiful women in this realm. A woman walked up to Mayki and asked, better now?
Mayki laughed, what will I learn in a body of a child.
Mayki noticed he was in island, in the middle of no where. He saw beautiful flowers and creatures.
Mayki was feeling home and his heart was filled with peace and joy.
I love this place, said Mayki to the woman.
The woman replied, is lovely.
Mayki asked the woman how he could live in the island. You can enjoy it, said the woman.
The woman's voice was so soft and she was very beautiful dressed in white dress.
Mayki asked, what about the God that owns the island? The woman laughed, there is no God here in the island little child, no rights and wrong here. You can choose which ever God you want.
What do you mean? Choose any God I want? And Mayki was confused more.
Mayki woke up in the forest it was as if he never left, but he knew he left the forest.
Mayki saved that moment in his heart, that he won't forget it.



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A mystery.
A world of different realms, Makyi in search of something, yet known to him. Beautiful story 😉

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Allegories are sometimes difficult to follow. However, although we may not be able to tease out a clear message from an allegory, in thinking about it we learn. We learn about ourselves and about the problem proposed. This story is a good example of that. While I may feel I understand the message, that's not as important as the fact that the story obliged me to think about the traveler's dilemma. It is a dilemma we all face, the puzzle of life. Where are we going? What does life mean?

This is a thoughtful story and one the reader is likely to read twice over. That's a good thing.

Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community.

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I will always do my best to post more interesting stories, thanks for the upvote

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This is an intriguing story, blending reality and imagination and leaving us to wonder what's real. I enjoyed reading it, @cryptofi.

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