Born Lucky ~ Haiku of Japan

鳥のうちの鷹に生まれし汝かな
tori no uchi no taka ni umareshi nanji kana



among all birds
you had the fortune
to be born a hawk
—Hashimoto Keiji

(trans. David LaSpina[1])

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("Hawk on a Pine Tree", by Ohara Koson)

You can feel Hashimoto's love for hawks in this haiku. He wrote a number of haiku on hawks. How lucky to be born a hawk rather than some lowly other kind of bird. You can understand his love for them—hawks are pretty cool!

The kigo (season word) here is hawk (taka, 鷹). It is a kigo for all winter. I know hawks were used for hunting in the Edo era (1603-1868), but beyond that I don't know enough about them to say why they are a winter kigo, and my saijiki doesn't give any details on that. If anyone here is more familiar with birds, maybe you can make a guess why this is. If you do, post it in the comments.


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    winter kigo

    have no idea about it. But, I really liked this haiku. It says so much with so few words. Hits the point accurately!

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    Kigo means season word. I should start including a small definition list at the bottom of these haiku posts. Season words are special words that set the haiku in a specific season and often in a specific part of the season.

    Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the comment.

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    Very beautiful haiku and very cool image, it must be great to be a hawk although I like eagles more, a hug friend =)

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    Eagles are pretty cool too! To be either one would be good.

    Thanks for the comment 😃

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