The Muted Waltz

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Poetry of the "The Muted Waltz" inspired by overcoming trauma:

Seeing the joy sparkle like stars reflected on the sea,
Chains holding my speech,
Some looking down on what had not been,
Roses falling down, painting the ocean red,

Looking ahead,
Tornado of blue hope embraced,
slowly breaking the chains which held me in place,
Remembering the starting day,
burning the chains away, gaze upon with searing flame.

Open to move, open to speak, the waltz began long before.
Where is the plea of past curiosity,
dancing the waltz of the muted mystery.



Thanks for reading so far 🙏 have a great day ✨

📷Credited Image Sources:
Images were generated with the aid of Disco Diffusion AI tools.

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Fantastic poem! It was a truly great read! Thank you very much for sharing it here on HIVE! All the best, much health, take care, stay safe, many blessings, and great peace your way! God bless you, have an excellent day, a wonderful weekend and be proud that you've overcome whatever harsh type of trauma you've previously been through! Much respect! Very beautiful artwork as well! May I kindly ask where is it from, what is it its original source? Or was it self-produced? If so, hats off! You are a fantastic graphic artist as well! 😊🙏✌️☮️

P.S.: Here's my musical recommendation to you, while we're discussing on the matter, more specifically 'Boogie Woogie Waltz' by one of the most finest American jazz fusion/jazz rock bands ever. I truly hope you'll like it. Needless to say, you've just earned a sturdy HIVE follower who is also a fellow poet.

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Great poem, with such rich and interesting descriptions! I sometimes struggle to interpret the metaphors within a verse but I must say yours are beautifully written 🙌 Thank you for sharing your experience of overcoming trauma! I believe writing can be very therapeutic in that process ❤️

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Quite mysterious and colourful! It is also a topic I adressed in a poetry I've written today 😘

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Very nice writing, I enjoyed reading it, I'm so glad you got out of that trauma, very cool picture expresses well what you felt at your time, thanks for sharing this great piece ☺

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Beautiful poem and photo which enhances the story.

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