The lonely Path
It wasn't the usual road
It was filled with thorns
The singing of birds were low
Scattered on the floor were weathered leaves
It was a lonely path, a way to self discovery
It wasn't the familiar path
It lacked the empathy people so desired
All who walked through it were strangers
Strangers to loneliness and strangers to fear
What lied ahead was veiled
No one could see farther than his sight can
Only faith was the substance they held onto.
It was a path to growth, a path to courage
All who walked the lonely Path learned courage
And above all, learned to be a survivor
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Hay un profundo sentimiento en tu escrito. Muy humano. La sobrevivencia a las dificultades de la vida. Gracias por compartir.
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Beautiful poem, usually not all of us have the same opportunities, some find it harder than others where they find many barriers in their way but it is part of life itself to self discover, thank you for sharing ♥
Rightly said, we all have different opportunities. While some find it hard, others don't but they're all part of life
Life is a lonely dance of bad experiences of struggles that were fought to overcome obstacles and triumphs that come with sacrifice and suffering.
Beautiful verses.
Thanks for sharing.
Good day.
And It's unfortunate that everyone must do this dance regardless of status
This poem is so profound. So little words but what they mean is very important.
The second stanza…
That really covers depth on what human beings who want to become great face once they make that conscious decision. They leave the path of comfort, thrust into the path filled with people who have been there and realise that they can’t make any excuses.
The pressure is much but only when they determine that they would overcome would they.
I love this Dwixer. Because it is happening to me. Thank you for this piece.
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Rightly said. The pressure is often much but determination makes us stand out. I sincerely hope that you overcome this phase of your life and come out stronger
I hope so too. ❤️❤️
I sense acceptance in this poem.
Nice one dear.
I hope you accepted it
Life comes with many options that we can't do away.
Poet,
Weldone sir🙌
Thank You Sir
A path of self discovery is a lonely path indeed because how can we find our true self if we can't walk by ourselves.
Short and meaningful.
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That's true, we need to walk on that path alone if we hope to succeed