The Silence Whispers

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Inbetween a valley of decision I stand
A courtroom where my fate would be decided
I stare at the porous window revealing the gallows
And I struggled between my faith and life

My hands ran through the beads of my rosary
And I could hear a silent whispers
-Its just a lie and you're saved
It felt good, but truth I've learned set one free

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What profit is your truth after death?
You can live and just say a word of repentance
And you'll live again in faith- the voice whispers.
How good is the whispers and how calm it spoke
But deception comes with it.

Like a bird in the sky i wanted to be free
And the cost i was ready to pay
I shut the silence voice out and spoke the truth
The judge in mustache laughed
-what I courage you have, but the truth was all
That was needed to set you free

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A tragic destiny marked with the sign of a journey of no return, a struggle towards freedom, a new destiny that starts from fear and develops on another existential plane.

Thanks for sharing.
Good day.

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It was indeed a redemption afterward

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Truth really does set one free. Great piece ❤️

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And most of the times deception whispers in silence, tries to play mind games, we are doing this to ourselves, at the same time we are not.

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You're right, most often it's the voice of deception that whispers

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Wow. You are right. Truth is all that is needed to set us free.

Thanks for sharing this thoughtful poem.

#dreemerforlife

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Yeah, just like the popular saying

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It is always good to tell the truth, even if for nothing, for free conscience. Enjoyed reading .

#dreemerforlife

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Glad you enjoyed reading through

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