RE: Hues of freedom
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A few more details about how Annie escapes the room and grabs the phone could add more tension. Also more insight into Annie's thoughts and feelings throughout the scary experience could make it feel more personal.
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I know right? The details about her eye problem took a large portion of the story. 🥲
Thank you for pointing that out. I'll make the adjustments in subsequent stories.