A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words: GREEN SPACE

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G ruelling heat from the mighty sun
R endered me helpless; I yearn for something fun
E vergreen paradise to keep me sane
E ven better if it starts to rain
N ow in the midst of this crazy heat

S ilently, I listened to my heart beat
P aradise that I've longed for the most
A ctually exists... it isn't just a ghost
C overed with greenery; laid my oasis
E ver so near, my very own green spaces



Describe what you see

  • I see a very lovely place in the middle of a hot sunny day.

Describe what you feel

  • It's quite relatable because it's so hot in my place right now. I've been longing to stay in such a refreshing place. I want to have such a place to just chill while doing some stuff.
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Nice poem! I can relate because here, the heat becomes unstoppable. Been wanting to relax to a place like this.

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I pray you get your paradise soon so as to be free from unwanted heat

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I love the unique spin you put on this poem. It was fun and compelling to read.

We all desire that special place, a place where our hearts can merry. I do hope we all live to see our dream-land.

Nice♥️

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Thank you... I'm glad you like it... I do hope we all find our special place someday. 🥰🥰🥰

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Love your poem! Perhaps you can create a place like this or it already exists?
I wish you some lower temps, please, do send me some better weather.

Greetings @wakeupkitty

Thanks for joining pic1000. 👍

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Thank you so much... <3
I hope so, too..
Maybe in a couple of months when rainy season officially starts. ;)

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