The Island
Upon that time
next to a dock
lonely tourists
pester islanders.
Kids outside,
in dirty clothes
bothering no one.
Ocean waves
crashing and
cracking yellow
sand to muck.
A photo
lost inside
memories.
Struggling for
returning moments
never to
appear again.
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Nice words. But could you say what inspired you to write it? Maybe I'd get your perspective more that way. Coz I don't really understand it right now. Or maybe it's just me😌.
Really love the attempt still. Coz I know it's not easy. Lol
Quizás contemple mejor sin esa carga, podría tal ve haber un vacío el tiempo se lleva muchas cosas. Quizás sobrevaloramos la memoria o quizás no infravaloramos el presente. Saludos, esto esta muy lindo
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Very heartfelt your poem my friend, the image flows perfectly with this great writing, greetings ♥.