Good Yards Natashi and Lazy Natusa. Part 1

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Good evening lovely people. Am finally here for my fiction story. Am glad to be part of this three-part story contest as organized by the scholars and scribe community in collaboration with the Dreemport community.

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My story is about two ladies who reside in a village called Ogbede Community.

Natashi and Natusa are twin young girls who reside in a town called Ogbede. These girls were fortunate to grow up with their parents but due to the condition, the parents found themselves in during holidays they send them to be with their grandparents.

While they grew Natashi always long to assist the mother with the house chores while Natusa will rather prefer to go play with her friends and little siblings outside. Sometimes Natashi will tell the mother about how Natusa refuses to do the simple chores that were assigned to her, after those complaints she will still go over and do those chores.

This attitude continued between these two girls, fortunately, they grew up and Natashi became so lovely and admirable. In fact, she has trained herself on how to do all the house chores within a few minutes and she enjoyed doing them all. Natashi goes as far as doing the laundry for all the members of her family every weekend and Natusa will confidently bring hers out to be done and then returned to her bedroom to have some more sleep.

When people visit the family Natashi will always stand up to go look for things that can be used to entertain them while the sister will prefer to just with them without any guilt.

What makes this worse is the fact that she refused to be corrected even when the parents speak to her about her bad attitude, if you stress her attitude she will better work out of you and enter her room and refuse to come out till the next day, some days if she comes out she will not respond to anyone's pleasantries including her parents.

People have started noticing her bad attitude including their family and friends. They always ask if this one can stay in a man's house tomorrow as a wife.

This is a multi-million question that can only be reviewed with time...

Join me in the next part to see the answer to this question.

Thanks for reading

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VERY EXCITED IT IS FINALLY HERE!
When will you release the next of the THREE PART SERIES?
Isn't that always the way with children? one is always working harder for the house and one is often more concerned with being social!!!

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Why is this so often the case?

And doesn't this end the argument nature or nurture? (not really... I"m pro the nurture side... but may have to rethink a bit now)

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I am firmly in the camp that it is NOT one or the other but rather, a mix of Nature and Nurture.

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Yeah... I used to think that too and then moved firmly into the nurture camp.

We should argue over coffee. This could take a while... 😁

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There's no argument. Coffee is useless. You are wrong for drinking it. 😁
Both Nurture and Nature!

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Tea then

And you may be wrong but only much conversation and time will tell! :)

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I know many Natusas!

I hope they figure out how to stop letting her get away with such nonsense 😀

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We need to handle them well

Hahahahha

We will see it soon

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They are something else entirely!

I'll wait to see how it works out :)

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A woman who cannot behave herself is an abuse to the world at large. This is such a relatable story and it reminds one of the many women we have in society today.
Let's see how she ends in the next episode.

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That's is it my friend

We will see more of her

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Ahem... :) The same goes for a man of course! 🙃

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Sure. Am just bothered with the story base.

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I am wondering is she will stay in a man's house with that character. Well, my brother will not marry her shaa...🤣🤣🤣, let's see the end 😅

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I wonder same to shaaa,

Your brother actually needs something better

We shall see

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I am confused....

This attitude continued between these two girls, fortunately, they grew up and Natusa became so lovely and admirable. In fact, she has trained herself on how to do all the house chores within a few minutes and she enjoyed doing them all.

This reads as if Natusa changed her attitude, yet the next paragraphs suggest otherwise. Or am I reading this wrong and "she" is meant to be Natashi?

On another note: Fascinating, how siblings (with identical DNA?) can still be so different. This puts (in my opinion) a huge + sign into the nurture/life experience column on contrast to behavior being decided by nature.

Small experiences, little nuances can have a huge impact on our world view, how we interact with it and hence how we behave.

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Ooh so lovely you read in between the lines

It is Natashi. Thanks for the observation

Yes, we humans can be different. And it is a resolution on a personal basis on how we wish to behalf

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