A REMARKABLE ONE
Can life gets better was the loud murmur he had when he opened his eyes with a frustrating expression?
He was not ready to leave the bed.
Reluctantly he robbed his palm over his face with a big sigh followed by a little prayer over his sick dad.
Then he walked silently over the sick bed just to see how the dad his faring, he could not help but felt pity for his old man.
This is becoming unbearable and tiring, Every of his savings and his mum's savings has been exhausted over the illness, and still no sign of recovery.
He felt downcasted and tired, the only news that can elevate him now is to see his dad fit and healthy.
Both his mum and himself have spent everything within their reach to help the sick dad. He sat close to the bed.
The room is filled with the smell of drugs and a sick atmosphere.
curtains were drawn together to prevent light from penetrating in.
The room temperature is kept in check just to please the sick one in the room.
Everything in the room is done differently just to help get a bearable atmosphere for his sick dad.
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If one asks him if he was cool with this the answer would be a capital no but sometimes we go extra miles for family and that is because of the bond and love.
Another day and no sign of improvement of his sick dad. it's like day by day his health just keeps deteriorating.
Sometimes he wishes him death out of love just to help him ease his pain.
The pain is just too much for his dad.
He could not stop staring at his weak dad on the bed fighting to have a smooth breath.
This is something he does not like, seeing his loved ones helpless and not able to render help. but then he also is helpless
His mum was already out trying to sort help from neighbors and friends just to get enough to get her husband to the hospital for better treatment but then it's like everyone she asks for help also have one problem or the other to sort out and no help is coming forth.
Everything seems not to work out. and the little hope she has is beginning to crumble
On her walk, she kept praying inwardly just to come across someone who will render help.
Her husband has been a very strong type but this illness happens to counter the strong one and it's as if the strong one has fallen.
Notwithstanding she was not ready to give up on him but kept seeking help.
After a long morning walk seeking for help with no solution she went back home to her son on what new step to take.
Son, what's the way forward?
How do we get your father better treatment?
The silence from both of them was a long one as they both have no answer to the questions and then a loud noise with a bright flash of light from outside broke the silence.
Without hesitation the son rushed out to have a look and when he got outside he could not figure out what was it that made the noise but came across a big bag.
At first they were sacred,they had bo idea what to do ,then the son summoned courage and move closer to the bag , opened it and saw tons of money right in the bag.
The fear of how much the money is made the mother shouted at her son.
This is a remarkable one but then she was not ready to have the money to herself she believes there's always a repercussions for things like this.
We cant take this money said the mother to her son
Leave the money out here and let's locked the door, whoever owns it will come get it at the right time.
Here is part one of the three-part serial fiction of scholar and scribe /dreemport challenge
Oh no, that's a really big temptation they are faced with. I wonder if the money was stolen or something but it's a good thing the mother was not so desperate that she didn't see any thing wrong in taking the money.
I'm waiting Patiently for part 2 😊😊.
Ohh yeah me too...
Waiting for your story 🌚🌚
Hahaha, me self I'm waiting for my story too 😏.
Lol..very well then
Yeah 😉.
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The miracle they were waiting for so long. But like the mother, that amount of money just left there also makes me very suspicious. I look forward to the next entry to see where that money came from 😎😁
Yeah
Who's knows it might be a miracle or not.
🤔 I hope that yes
oh wow, i thought it would be someone had left some herbal remedy or something. looking forward to seeing what happens with the money.
Yeah me too
And week two is here would definitely know how it went down..
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cool! i will look out for it.
I understand this feeling. It's a pity though. I hope his dad gets better.
The money? Someone should tell his mum it won't magically disappear cos I don't want it to. 😂😂
Lol..
You never can tell
Sometimes miracles work and sometimes we might just be at the wrong place....
When they need money the most, they show up. Test! They may get in trouble if they take it, but they can save the father.
Yeah it two ways
Now I guess they are stuck in between what to do and what not to do
Good start on your story @ijohnsen, and I would go and read it out loud to yourself (it's called proofreading and should always be done) and fix some of the typos and missing words that you can add to fill in.
Other than that this is most excellent!
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On that right away.
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That's really a poignant situation when you think of the death for your loved one because you couldn’t see them in pain.
I am eager to know what happens to that money. Will they use it or not. Was it dropped intentionally or coincidentally
Waiting for part 2 🙂
Yeah it really painful.
The money?
Maybe or maybe not
But I'm sure part will give us the fill details.
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No way! What a virtue to leave the money! But I'm guessing already that they might return to take back the money... I think the money appeared from heaven 😅 and its for them.
Well, we'll find out in the next part and I'm waiting impatiently for it ❤️
Oh yeah.
Maybe it's a miracle maybe not..lol
Part 2 should tell more.
No problem, I'll wait 😏
Hmmm, this story sounds interesting. Wonder what they will do with the money :)
Yeah
Maybe it's a miracle or not.
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I would be scared too to find that kind of money on my doorstep. With their situation, it is hard not to be tempted. I hope his mother is firm in her decision.
Yeah me too
Maybe the money is a miracle, maybe not..
I'm sure part 2 will tell more
I cannot wait then.
An answer to their prayers, and she wants to leave it outside??? I wouldn't think that's a good idea 😲😲😲
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Maybe it's a miracle, maybe not.
I'm sure part 2 will tell more
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I am thinking if they won't really take the money despite the difficult situation.
Hmm... it's an interesting story and the attention of readers will wait for the next part!
Yeah it is
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Damn, that's very strange, being in this situation and suddenly, money appears to help you solve it. But many possibilities open up in such a case. As it is fiction, it may surprise us with what will happen. But it is interesting to think about these things. Excellent friend. Here, doing last-minute homework. Hugs.
Yeah you are right
Exactly as a friction you never can tell what will happen.
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Hehe, what will happen to the money? Will they take it? Let's see what will happen in part 2
Maybe the money is a miracle or not
Eiiiii part 2 will tell more
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