Sneaky but pleasurable moment
Blossom was asleep when I woke up. She still had her head on my lap, and her mouth was open, drooling a little bit of saliva onto my thigh. Her arms were wrapped around me tightly like she was trying to pull herself closer to me in her sleep.
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After a minute or two of watching her peaceful face, I couldn't help but start rubbing her back. The soft fur tickled against my fingertips as I slid them down from the top of her head all the way to her tail. My hands were warm and they felt good against the cool skin of Blossom's body.
I stroked her back slowly, gently, letting my fingers move across every inch of her smooth, naked skin. As my hand reached lower it brushed over her ass. It was firm and round, and I could feel it pressing into my leg through her shorts.
My cock twitched inside my underwear at the thought of touching her there. I slid my hand under her shirt and rubbed her bare stomach, feeling the muscles hard beneath her soft skin. I traced an idle circle around her navel before moving my finger down toward her crotch.
Her hips began to stir slightly, rolling slightly with the motion of my hand. Her breathing became heavier and faster. Then suddenly she let out a loud snore, and my hand froze in place. She was still asleep though, so I continued to stroke her. She moved again and moaned quietly in her sleep. I rubbed harder this time, pressing my palm against her clothed pussy.
It felt very warm, and I could hear the sound of liquid hitting the fabric. I rubbed her harder now, sliding my hand between her legs. Her shorts were tight, but not too tight. I could feel the heat radiating off her skin, and I could smell her scent in the air. I pressed harder against the cloth of her panties and felt a thick bulge push against my fingers.
I pushed my finger inside her. It went in easily without resistance as if her pussy was already wet. I curled my finger around her clitoris, rubbing it softly. I could feel Blossom squirm, and the wetness increased.
She let out a long groan that sounded more like a purr. I kept rubbing, moving my middle finger in and out of her pussy. The sensation of her warmth and moisture made me want to plunge deeper. I pushed my index finger inside and stopped.
She started to make low moaning sounds again. "Mm-hmm," she said.
"What is it?" I asked, concerned.
"I'm just so fucking hot." She rolled her hips and ground her crotch against my hand.
I slipped another finger inside her, then pulled them out. I slid them both back in, curling them around her clit. This time she didn't stop me, and soon I was pumping them in and out of her, fast and deep. She was making loud, animalistic noises now.
"Oh, oh, oh!"
I kept going until she grabbed my wrist.
"No more. Stop."
I withdrew my fingers, gasping for breath. "Are you okay?"
Blossom sat up straight and looked down at me. "Yeah, but I have to pee really badly."
"Oh, well, we can do something about that, right?" I stood up and helped her to her feet. She was trembling slightly, and I could see the sweat on her brow. I led her to the bathroom where she took care of business. When she finished and came out I handed her a towel.
"Thanks, I needed that."
"Anything else?"
Blossom smiled, looking embarrassed. "Well, um... my clothes are kind of messy."
I nodded. "Okay, I'll go get some extra towels for cleaning up after you."
I headed downstairs to find some paper towels. By the time I got back, upstairs Blossom had taken off her shirt and shorts, leaving only her bra and panties. I watched as she carefully folded each article of clothing and placed them on top of the hamper. Once done, she turned to face me and smiled nervously.
I walked over and hugged her. "You're so beautiful, Blossom."
She leaned back to look into my eyes. "Thank you."
True definition of erotic.
The first paragraph is captivating and it keeps the reader glued to story.
I also love how detailed the story was...interesting adjectives.
Blossom seems to be a bad girl and the guy doesn't look like he's going to say no hehe.
I guess he had assumed that it had all ended after she went to pee.
The story is well-written and can make one start imagining things hehe.
Awwwnnnn... Thank you so much, Jessica. I love the fact that you loved this. And you appreciate all the details. I am honored. Thanks.
Who no like better thing? 😃
Should they continue? 🤭😋
Steamy and sensual!
Hehehehe... Thank you 🙏🙌
This is lovely, just like the one I read yesterday. Will have to reread when I'm done with work
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Oh. It's okay. I'll be waiting for your response when you find the time to read.
Thanks for stopping by. ❣️🙌
Hey, @iskawrites, glad to see you're beginning to take this blog seriously.
This is an amazing erotic story. I read the other ones, they are beautiful.
I am motivated/challenged to write fictional stories on my blog too. What do you think?
Yes, thanks Edystringz.
You can if you want to.
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I am also joining the #hivenano2020 fiction contest. In order to be encouraged and motivated to write.
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Steamy as fuck! 😈 Good show, a definite good start to my morning. 😅 I like that it also is a closed-loop, we get to experience this one encounter between these two lovelies, it's not just random, ya know? Good stuff.
If I was to give you any advise is that sometimes you over-explain things. Cutting one word here and there will make the reading experience much smoother. There's a real good example of this in your very first paragraph:
We turn that into:
Blossom was asleep when I woke up. She still had her head on my lap, mouth open as she drooled onto my thigh. Her arms were wrapped tightly around me, as if pulling me closer in her sleep.
Very few edits, but I think you see the shift in flow that this provides. Bear in mind, this is a nitpick. 😅 I'm just telling you what I think - giving you my 2 cents,. Writing has no rules and you should do what you want. 😌
Have a great rest of you day!
Thanks for the awesome appreciation and advice.
I don't know why I over-explain things.. even if I am telling a personal story 🤦🏿♀️
I'll try to reduce some words in the future. I am not promising that it will be sudden though, but I can promise you that I'll learn.
Thanks again ☺️🥰
Do you. Be true to yourself. I'm just making an observation - use it as you see fit. 🙂
I completely understand. Thanks again. ☺️🥰😍
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What a well-written story is. Great imagination. I hope you are having a wonderful day.
When you said you thought it may be too much for Dreemport, you weren't kidding !LOL Great writing though, Iska. Well-crafted steamy erotica... !PIZZA !ALIVE
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Damn, you're really good with the descriptions. This one draws you into the room and then locks the door, well done!
I've never written erotic kind of stuff. I kind of cringe at myself when I even try and end up deleting it haha this was really well done! If I was to write erotic scenes I'd want them to read like this.
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Haha... You are even doing an awesome description with your comment too.. lol.
But why not? Are you scared of your sexuality? 😁 Maybe, you need to embrace it and the writings will come with ease.
Thanks for the appreciation, I am honoured. 💕💕💕
I'm not sure, I just feel a little bit awkward when I try to write scenes like that. I'm not uncomfortable with it, I just kind of have a writing block against it I guess haha
I'll try though and see how I get on, I'm sure it might work if I take it one sentance at a time.
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Wow @iskawrites just had the chance to reread this.
Mehn this like a fire and brimstone, too detailed to be contained, with a bit suspense added, amazing.
Well all I can say is thank God I read it after work.
Nice erotic fiction.