RE: Trapped
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That is very well written David, and what a twist at the end hahahaha, never saw that one coming, being stuck in a song that you can't turn off would be something else, especially if it was forever!!!
Excellent pick of graphics also, very well matched to the storyline.
Couple of little errors:
"the uproar from crowd almost" should be from "the" crowd lol.
"since it was broken after his far from the stage." should be "fall" from the stage?
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I'm glad you love the story. It gives me the motivation to do more.
Thanks so much for those corrections. I've done them. I appreciate