RE: Five minutes of Introspection

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You have a terrific writing style, @jackdeathblack. Instead of telling the story in a linear fashion (this happened, then that happened, etc.), you create an experience and a sense of something bizarre going on that the reader must come to understand. I really like this contemplative style, and how the narrator takes us on a mental tour of the things that trouble him as he becomes aware of his dire circumstances.



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Thank you very much for the support and your valuable comment, if it occurred to me to make history from a point of view little addressed, to make the reader get into the character and reach a world of introspection that is known and familiar.

Thanks for the support and happy afternoon.

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