LA MUCHACHA DORMIDA / THE SLEEPING GIRL
LA MUCHACHA DORMIDA
La muchacha, dormida, se bañaba en las flores
y las flores soñaban con más lluvias de sueños
y los sueños, miraban.
La muchacha soñaba, esta vez, con los sueños mojados,
y las flores, dormidas, se bañaban, esta vez en los sueños
y los sueños, cantaban.
La muchacha, dormida, se encontró con las flores
y las flores le dieron el olor de otros sueños
y los sueños, bailaban.
La muchacha, despierta, ya no vio más las flores
y las flores la vieron como un sueño logrado
y los sueños quedaron, nuevamente olvidados.
THE SLEEPING GIRL
The little girl, asleep, bathed in the flowers
and the flowers dreamed of more showers of dreams
and the dreams... watched.
The girl dreamed, this time, that the dreams were wetting
and the flowers, asleep, bathed, this time in dreams
and the dreams... sang.
The little girl, asleep, met the flowers
and the flowers gave her the taste of other dreams
and the dreams... danced.
The little girl, awake, no longer saw the flowers
and the flowers saw her as a dream reached
and the dreams were, again, forgotten.
Esta es mi participación para el Club de Poesía de @freewritehouse, anímense y participen.
Imagen de portada de Pixabay editada en Power Point.
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It's impossible to fully evaluate a poem translated from another language, but this reads a little bit like a nursery rhyme, with a bittersweet ending. Actually, the ending comes across as more bitter than sweet, although, it's true she can revisit her friends, the flowers and her dreams, any time she sleeps. It's lovely even translated. :)
Cierto, es difícil evaluar una traducción, pero creo que captaste lo más significativo del poema. Gracias por el esfuerzo.
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Gracias por tan magnifico apoyo.