Starlight Spectre • Part 17: How Strange the World Could Be

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Part 17: How Strange the World Could Be

The police found them the next morning, asleep and curled up together amid the foundations of an old train station, right between the rotting rails of the abandoned line. The cab driver that dropped them off at the convenience store had had a bad feeling about the sketchy guy and drugged up looking girl—they had raised a flag with the local authorities.

Gabriella's parents had already been in touch with said authorities, on the edge of filing a missing persons report after several days of radio silence. The people at the library had noted that the guy she was running around with had missed work recently.

In a small town, all this was more than enough to warrant some question-asking. The convenience store clerk confirmed spotting the two heading toward the highway. One particular caretaker remembered that they had been down to the tracks before. A few units and a bunch of local volunteers had combed the area, concerned that the girl might be in danger.

Later, the two claimed they’d planned a hike and lost track of time. The girl explained her strange behaviour away as school related stress. People were skeptical, but with no charges being pressed and no evidence of any wrongdoing, there was little the officials could do.

It was a while before Rudy saw Barton again—the kid kept to himself for a while after Gabriella went back to school. From what Rudy heard, she switched out of engineering and into astrophysics, of all things. Apparently, it was one field that let her really get into the study of time.

Not one to pry, the old caretaker let it alone, though he was terribly curious to know what in the blue hell they had gotten up to that night. He had a feeling it wasn’t the usual stuff that young folks did out there under the moon. Every now and then he would see Barton at the library, running his hand along books, sometimes standing near the filing cabinets in the rear. Rarely, they’d chat, but never about trains or tracks or ghosts.

Then one day, the kid came to him and told him he was moving. Out to the big city. Rudy asked if he was gone chasing after that Gabby girl, but Barton just smiled in sad way and told him that he hadn’t spoken to her in a while.

“Well, guess our paths be done crossin’ for any foreseeable time,” said the old man.

Barton nodded, then said, “Can I tell you a story?”

They went for a walk along the river, ambling as dragonflies darted about and tree fuzz blew in the air. He told Rudy everything that happened—the girl had remembered parts of it, believed it, but she wasn’t there with the one he called Timekeeper. She had never met the shadow.

The kid laid it all out in one go, watching the sky, not a haunted look on his face, but a peaceful one. Rudy had heard some odd tales in his time, thought he had heard it all—that was for sure. But as he watched Barton’s eyes get misty and faraway he was reminded again just how strange the world could be.

When Barton was done, Rudy said, “Sure ain’t a scoutmaster’s bedtime ditty, that.”

“I’d set my watch by it,” said Barton.

“Aye, don’t I believe you when you say so.”

Barton wrote to Rudy sometimes. In the letters, he claimed that he and Gabby were still friends and chatted occasionally over social media, something that Rudy had heard about but had no inkling as to how to make it useful for him. Barton married some art curator, had a family, the whole deal. He never mentioned the tracks again.

As time passed, the letters slowed, then stopped.

Life went on. The caretaker kept the library clean and tidy, best he could. But age was a sure thing, and Rudy’s able-bodied days ran thin. He thought a lot about time lately, and as he did, Barton’s story kept creeping back to him. He had never decided how much of it he had truly believed, but sure enough those police records and newspaper clippings never did turn up. He wondered about the old train, those lost passengers, and the shadow.

So, one late-August evening, surely against the sage advice of his doctor, Rudy had one of the local four-wheeling boys haul his bony frame up into the woods, along some back paths and old trails. It had been over five years since Barton’s last letter.

He hobbled to the spot where they said they had found the two curled up and asleep, among the crusted foundations of a long-gone destination. The sky was dimming, and the night bugs were ramping up their songs as the old caretaker got down on the dirt and lowered his withered ear to the tracks.

He pressed down on the cool metal, closed his eyes, and listened.

 

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As much as I hate to see a good story end, this is a good one. Love the bittersweet nature of the dust off between Barton and Gabby. Shoulda known that this whole experience would be too much for their relationship. I also really appreciate how you left the ending so open for interpretation, like your readers could do just about anything with what happens next in their imagination. More of that "show, don't tell" that you have talked about before. Very well written, man! Have a !BEER on me!

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Appreciate the kind words, and for your time and attention throughout the story! I like to think Barton and Gabby are both better for it, but who knows. That kinda stuff would be pretty traumatizing.

Cheers! !PIZZA

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Oh, what a wholesome ending. In a slightly unnerving sense. It's ambivalent. The switch in POV was a little disorienting, but the ending was great regardless. Is the haunting still ongoing, did Barton's efforts mean nothing, it brings so many questions. A nice little cliffhanger that doesn't subtract the feeling on conclusion. I'm sad it ended, though.

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Thank you! I noticed the POV myself on reread, but felt that it was permissible to help shift the mood to denouement. It almost has an epilogue vibe versus a 'Part 17,' but I dunno if novellas have epilogues. 🤷🏼‍♂️

Double thank you for reading along and leaving feedback part-by-part. It is very rewarding to see folks engaged!

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I love that the story ends with Rudy! Although I miss a bit the Gabby of the first chapters, I understand that her evolution is better for the plot. Congratulations for everything, for this story that kept us expectant throughout 17 parts, for the idea of promoting it through giveways and for the tokenization 👏. !PIZZA !LUV

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Thank you, I'm glad it was able to hold onto your interest! The next thing I release should be even more ambitious 😮

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(ENG) Hello happy afternoon. Dear friend, I want to sincerely congratulate you for the great achievement to which you brought this magnificent story of suspense and horror. It was a pleasure to read you during the evenings, accompanied by a cup of steaming black coffee, although not as much as the trains. Wow it was 17 chapters of impeccable storytelling that, kept me in suspense from the first line until the momentous ending that I didn't see coming. Of course, I can't leave out the perfect description of the natural scenery and the train that immersed you in that imaginary world of a golden age. A big hug.

(ESP) Hola feliz tarde. Querido amigo, quiero felicitarte sinceramente por el gran logro al que llevaste esta historia magnífica de suspenso y horror. Fue un gusto leerte durante las noches, acompañado de una taza de café negro humeante, aunque no tanto como los trenes. Woow fueron 17 capítulos de una narrativa impecable que, me mantuvo en suspenso desde la primera línea hasta el final trascendental que no vi venir. Por supuesto, no puedo dejar de lado la descripción perfecta de los escenarios naturales y el tren que te sumergían en ese mundo imaginario de una época de oro. Un gran abrazo

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Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm glad the tale was able to transport you. I hope to add much more serialized fiction to Hive. 😀

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Such a beautiful ending, I guess not all relationships end up with happily ever after. Well it would have been nice if there was more to their Romance. Maybe things could have turned out different if they never embarked on such adventure.

It was a nice journey so far reading your stories was an amazing experience, I am glad I was privileged to be part of the readers of this story till the end. In anticipation of what comes next.

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Happy ending.
Pont of view change to Rudy.
Well done.

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Thank you for reading and commenting all throughout!

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5 years this has been happening to me, it started here, around people that are still here. Homeland security has done nothing at all, they are not here to protect us. Dont we pay them to stop shit like this? The NSA, CIA, FBI, Police and our Government has done nothing. Just like they did with the Havana Syndrome, nothing. Patriot Act my ass. The American government is completely incompetent. The NSA should be taken over by the military and contained Immediately for investigation. I bet we can get to the sources of V2K and RNM then. https://peakd.com/gangstalking/@acousticpulses/electronic-terrorism-and-gaslighting--if-you-downvote-this-post-you-are-part-of-the-problem

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He couldn't have heard her though, Timekeeper finally got her rest :) ...

Thanks so much for a great tale!!!

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You’re welcome! I’m glad you enjoyed it—thanks for leaving your thoughts as you went through :)

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My pleasure - but I missed commenting on a few, due to wanting to read on 😂 It had me hooked!

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Hahah this is a completely acceptable excuse 😉

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