Vegetables To The Sunset.... (An Original Poetry)
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Vegetables To The Sunset
In our heart of steel,
heel of metals
and limbs of gold
we are just green to the world,
shaken in our root
like feathers in the storm
fluffy to the wind,
and unsteady as a castle,
built on the sands.
Our nakedness is hidden,
like a spark in daylight
as tongue rambles,
tweaking about our imperfections!
our eardrums are woozy
trembling from banter
of castigating eyes
but we have stood!
still and still.
Like a bulb, unfurling into enigma
the sun can tell,
we've been smooched by thorn,
torn from life's glee
like an ocean colorless of blue
strength oozes from us,
from our hopeless smiles
to our beautiful scorn.
Look at us!
voiceferously stern
to prove unseeable things
standing rigidly
as vegetables to the sunset!
glittering like a star,
but temporal as a bubble
blooming boisterously on us!
When hooves and staves
stampedes like a thousand chariot
through the swamp
we were buried, deep rooted
awaiting our demise
patiently,
savoring the kill
but then we're born again!
blinking in the morn
unready to die
When all is reborn
and the apocalypse reigns
and lifelessness reeks
aplenty, livid in the nostril.
still, we are healthy.
above all odds,
hoisted victoriously
when everything has embraced
the inevitability of death.
Written by @Josediccus
7/6/2020
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My name is @Josediccus, a young Nigerian student who is a Vlogger, A Psychologist, Poet And Sports Writer/Analyst. I'm using my contents as a process to create shared meaning as well as create expressions through which people on/off hive can relate. I believe content is a process to be enjoyed and relished and I'm up for any collaborations in my field stated above. Cheers
@Josediccus, your brother-in-pen & heart
I'm hoping to reach more people who are broken at heart and spirit, so share on any platform or rehive
Wonderful photography, today I am going to appreciate your photography more than writing... You should continue your photography journey...
Thanks a whole lot Priyan. Actually I wasn't confident about the edit but then im actually learning bit by bit and I'm hoping I can be real better soon. Thanks again
Wonderful piece of poetry Jose.
Wish I can steal your pen, lol
Hahaha I'm glad you like it, you can also create stunning piece it depends on what inspires you
Very beautiful piece!!!! I actually wish I could write poems
I have gone through this work for the 3rd and i still can't find all the messages it carries. All i can say is Wow! You amaze me with your work and how your poetry carries so much message all in one piece. I picked out that tagged verse because even as simple as the message looks, it still has a massive message in it.
Yeah soon I might want to add the poetic analysis of the poem after I write so there might be understanding to each and every unique perspective of a poem.
That would be great. That's like further step....nice one bro
Well written bro! I like your poem.
Gorgeous poem. I especially loved these verses:
Thanks a whole lot, I made sure to paint the images I wanted to create with good intents and hence that's why I coined those lines in that fashion
You have done it again. A poem that speaks to and for the soul. So many messages to take from it. It's not all rosy but we will keep holding on.
Thanks for the awesome comment, yeah I try as much as possible to make it good