It Still Hurts | ZAPFIC50 MONDAY | (1/23/23) - Prompt: sister

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The prompt this week "sister" presented the opportunity to explore siblings and other family members. If one has a large family , there are always cliques within the family. Some siblings are closer than others. They're all special. It's just that you see eye to eye with one or more of them.

This week's prompt is special for me. Although only eight years older, my sister was my mother and friend. She was our savior when both parents worked outside the home to make ends meet. There will never be another like her. Although I still have chills when I remember the EX-LAX in the chocolate cake! Not funny at all! But all was forgiven.

I relate my feelings in the ZAPFIC50 Monday for this week. This challenge is brought to you by @felt-buzz.

My story is below:

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She cooked breakfast, lunch, and dinner for four younger siblings, and one older brother.

She babysat us younger ones.

She entertained us.

She played weird jokes: Ex-Lax in chocolate cake; uncooked oatmeal.

She placed her life on hold until we were old enough.

Type1 Diabetes.

Age 50: Died.

My SISTER!


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I leave here the screenshot evidencing the 50 word limit for my story:

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If you'd like to participate, here's the official post: It's Monday! Your favourite day of the week! Get ready for another #ZapFic50Monday: write me a story in precisely 50 words!

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RULES:
  • Post to the Freewriters Community.

  • Use #freewritehouse, zapfic50monday, and #zapfic tags.

  • Please use a word/character counter (if you search for word counter on the internet or in your phone's app store you will get a big choice!) wordcounter.net and include a screenshot. This makes it easier for you and @feltbuzz!

  • Use the prompt provided as you see fit (use your imagination)

  • You have 3 days (until Thursday 23h59 GMT) to post a Zapfic50 Monday (a story written in exactly 50 words) using the prompt given.

  • Try to tell a complete story if you can!

  • The story should only exactly 50 words (including spaces)

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Thanks,
@justclickindiva

Happy rest of the week everyone with whatever your endeavors.

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Bang, I did it again... I just rehived your post!
Week 140 of my contest just started...you can now check the winners of the previous week!
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Hmmmmm she lived a life of sacrifice and worthy of emulation. They have lost a loving and caring sister, I feel sorry for them. Nice short story mate

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Yes, my older sister was one-of-a-kind and a fabulous chef. She had a huge impact on my life. I think of her daily.

BTW...I'm a female.

Thanks for your visit and have a good rest of your week.

Take care.

!ALIVE

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I'm so sorry!!! Great zapfic though...

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Thanks so much. I appreciate your thoughtfulness and support.

Take care.

!LADY
!ALIVE

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