The Promise | ZAPFIC50 MONDAY (1/8/24) | Prompt: prosper (prosperar)

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It's time for the ZAPFIC50 Monday challenge again. This new challenge by @felt-buzz presented the opportunity to explore the prompt this week "prosper". When I think of being prosperous or someone having the ability to prosper, I think of people who are happy, healthy, and wealthy. But it takes more than that to truly be prosperous. One can proper in their faith and their spirit as well as in their finances. I share a flash fiction story that relates to someone taking advantage of the downtrodden for their own gain. These type of actions will not lead to prosperity for the perpetrator. The format of this challenge is a ZAPFIC50Monday story, one that must be told in exactly 50 words.

My story is below:

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Enthralled by Prosper's charm, hundreds flocked to him. The room was overflowing with hope. There were people everywhere. People stuffed hands in empty pockets. People prayed. People consoled others. People doubtful whether Prosper would deliver.

Finished praying, Prosper leaned down, holding a prayer cup, hoping someone would spare a dollar.

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Ha llegado la hora del reto de los lunes de ZAPFIC50. Este nuevo reto por @felt-buzz presentó la oportunidad de explorar el tema de esta semana "prosperar". Cuando pienso en ser próspero o en alguien que tiene la capacidad de prosperar, pienso en personas felices, sanas y ricas. Pero se necesita más que eso para ser verdaderamente próspero. Uno puede ser próspero tanto en su fe y su espíritu como en sus finanzas. Comparto una historia de ficción flash que se relaciona con alguien que se aprovecha de los oprimidos para su propio beneficio. Este tipo de acciones no conducirán a la prosperidad del autor. El formato de este desafío es una historia ZAPFIC50Monday, que debe contarse exactamente en 50 palabras.

A continuación mi historia.

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La promesa

Embelesados por el encanto de Prosper, cientos de personas acudieron a él. La sala rebosaba esperanza. Había gente por todas partes. La gente se metía las manos en los bolsillos vacíos. La gente rezaba. La gente consolaba a los demás. La gente dudaba de si Prosper cumpliría.

Cuando terminó de rezar, Prosper se inclinó, sosteniendo una copa de oración, con la esperanza de que alguien le diera un dólar.

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I leave here the screenshot evidencing the 50-word limit for my story for ZAPFIC50Monday 1/8/24:

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If you'd like to participate, here's the official post:
Si quieres participar, aquí tienes el post oficial:

Are you ready for a brand new week? Are you ready for #ZapFic50Monday? Write me a story in precisely 50 words!

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RULES:
  • Post to the Freewriters Community.

  • Use #freewritehouse, zapfic50monday, and #zapfic tags.

  • Place a link to your post in the comments to the official ZAPFIC50 Monday post.

  • Please use a word/character counter (if you search for word counter on the internet or in your phone's app store you will get a big choice!) wordcounter.net and include a screenshot. This makes it easier for you and @feltbuzz!

  • Use the prompt provided as you see fit (use your imagination)

  • You have 3 days (until Thursday 23h59 GMT) to post a Zapfic50 Monday (a story written in exactly 50 words) using the prompt given.

  • Try to tell a complete story if you can!

  • The story should only exactly 50 words (including spaces)

NORMAS:
  • Postea en la comunidad de Freewriters.

  • Utiliza las etiquetas #freewritehouse, zapfic50monday y #zapfic.

  • Pon un enlace a tu post en los comentarios del post oficial del Lunes de ZAPFIC50.

  • Utiliza un contador de palabras/caracteres (si buscas contador de palabras en Internet o en la tienda de aplicaciones de tu teléfono tendrás una gran selección) wordcounter.net e incluye una captura de pantalla. Así será más fácil para ti y para @feltbuzz.

  • Utiliza el texto como mejor te parezca (usa tu imaginación).

  • Tienes 3 días (hasta el jueves a las 23h59 GMT) para publicar un Zapfic50 Monday (una historia escrita en exactamente 50 palabras) utilizando el tema propuesto.

  • Intenta contar una historia completa si puedes.

  • La historia debe tener exactamente 50 palabras (espacios incluidos).

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Good luck everyone with whatever your endeavors.

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SOURCES:
a) JustClickindiva's Footer created in Canva utilizing its free background and images used with permission from discord admins.
b) Unless otherwise noted, all photos taken by me with my (i) Samsung Galaxy 10" Tablet, (ii) Samsung Phone, & (iii) FUJI FinePix S3380 - 14 Mega Pixels Digital Camera
c) Purple Butterfly part of purchased set of Spiritual Clip Art for my Personal Use
d) All Community logos, banners, page dividers used with permission of Discord Channel admins.
e) Ladies of Hive banner used with permission of and in accordance with the admin's guidelines
f) Thumbnail Image created by me in Canva.
g) "Flames." What is Apophysis 2.09. https://flam3.com/

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English is my native language.
If translation included, I use DeepL to assist my readers.
Thanks for your patience an understanding
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El inglés es mi lengua materna.
Si se incluye traducción, utilizo DeepL para ayudar a mis lectores.
Gracias por su paciencia y comprensión.

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Prayer could make people to be very emotional
Nice story!

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Yes, it could. However, people who are dishonest take advantage of the less fortunate and less educated.

Thanks for your visit and lovely compliment. I appreciate it and your support.

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