Like Stars In The Sky

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Amina held on tightly to her father's arm. The man’s thick muscles made her hands hurt. She dared not to protest. “You must always hold on to my arm. The market is not a playground. You can easily get hurt, robbed, or worse still, beaten. Be sure to always be by my side”. Her father would always caution. “Here, hold this bag of oranges and wait here in front of Mallam Jafar’s shop. I will get some meat from the butcher”. Her father spoke firmly as he nodded toward Jafar the shop owner.

Amina clutched the bag to her chest looking around the market. Buyers and sellers alike bargaining prices, merchants dropping off supplies, and young pick-up boys waiting to move the wares of buyers. The chattering and bustling overwhelmed Amina as she stood there like a spectator. Her eyes then darted to a group of young boys in the corner. They were whispering without taking their eyes off her.

Before Amina could decipher what was happening, one of the boys had walked briskly towards her and snatched her bag of oranges. Amina staggered and almost fell to the ground. She became filled with rage. She went after the boy stamping her feet in the mud as she pushed through people in the market. Amina stopped abruptly when she saw an old woman use her walking stick to trip the boy. Her cane sent the boy and the bag of oranges straight to the ground. The woman then used it to knock on the boy’s head. “I'm sorry. My friends and I are very hungry”. The boy muttered while shielding his head with his palms.

Amina got there in time to pick up her bag of oranges- some of which had rolled all over the place. “Amina! You had only one job-to wait. What are you doing on the ground of the market?”

“Baba a boy snatched my bag and this woman helped me”. Amina raised her head to look but didn't find the old woman anywhere. She then looked to a corner and saw a hooded figure disappearing from the crowd.

“What woman Amina? Pickup those oranges and let's go home”. Her father furrowed his forehead into a frown. On their way home, Amina asked clutching her father's arms. “Baba! Do you believe that guardians exist?”

“Why so Amina?”

“Mama used to tell me that there are stars on earth. She said to me,’ Amina, whenever you feel helpless, look up to the skies. The stars will protect you. I believe her. The old woman from the market was the same one who helped me find Sina the other day. I knew it was her when I saw that black hood. She brought Sina to the river and just like that, I couldn't find her. She had disappeared”. Amina raised her head to look at her father. He was deep in thought.

“Listen Amina. The only Star I know on earth was your mother. She lit up our worlds and I know she's watching over us”. Amina’s father tapped her shoulders gently. They both smiled affectionately.

Later that evening, Amina sat on a wet stone by the river. She had brought Sina, her favorite calf to draw in some water late in the evening. It was the last part of her chores as a farm girl. Quietly, she listen to the soft puddles of the water accompanied by Sina's gentle gulps. The matching sounds always calmed her spirits.

The night was quiet and dark except for the twinkling stars that filled the sky. Most nights, Amina would sit and count the stars as she waited on Sina. It was her moment of bliss. That night, Amina noticed there were more stars in the sky. Patches of them. She was amazed. There were two stars directly beneath where Amina sat. Amina lifted her head and looked intently, she thought they were hovering around her. One star had less luster than the other.

Amina then began to notice something strange. The stars began to hit on each other violently. “Huh. Look, Sina. Are they fighting?”

Amina steadied her gaze. She watched the brighter star receive a hit that shot it with the speed of light straight from the sky to the bushes. Amina's eyes widened. She was petrified for a moment. She stood contemplating what to do next. “Should I call baba? No! He would not believe it”.

Amina started to walk towards the bush path. She could see very dim light emanating through some foliage. Amina got closer and knelt near the star. The light from it was pulsating. “Wow. A star”. Amina gasped. She slowly picked it off the ground. It filled up her frail hands. The star felt so cold and fragile. Amina noticed one of its left spikes had almost been severed. Quickly she got some gum Arabic from a nearby acacia tree and patched it together. “This would work”, she whispered.

After setting Sina in her shelter together with the other cows, Amina snuck into her bedroom with the star. She barely slept that night. Occasionally she would peek at the star beneath her pillow. It was getting warmer by the hour. An hour later, Amina peeked at the star, this time the star began to dematerialize into the smallest star dust packed together. Amina watched in awe as the particles ascended and light engulfed her entire bedroom. Then instantly, the particles moved like waves through her window straight to the sky. Amina watched as the particles materialized back into a star and positioned themselves.

Amina thought she saw the light sparkle twice like a wink. She took a deep long breath. Amina wasn't afraid. She felt a kind of surge she couldn't explain through her entire body. Peacefully, she went back to bed. The next day at the farm, Amina sat alone in a shed thinking about all that had happened the previous night. Lost in thoughts, she looked far ahead. She could see a figure. When she looked closer, Amina recognized the black hood. It was the hooded old woman watching her from a distance.

Determined to speak to her, Amina raced so hard. “Please stop. I want to talk to you”. The woman couldn't walk any faster. Amina had caught up with her. She looked down and noticed that the old lady was limping on her left leg.

“Who are you and how did you get hurt?” Amina demanded still trying to catch her breath.

“Sometimes, when evil comes lurking around our loved ones. We have to fight to protect them”. The woman's voice was calm like the waves.

“Wait! Is that gum Arabic on your foot?

“There!” the old woman pointed and before Amina could turn back around, only stardust lingered in the air.



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@kei2, your story is mystical yet realistic — a wonderful example of the "magical realism" genre. The elements that stray beyond our ability to embrace them as "real" — such as the star being knocked out of the sky and then being something she can hold in her hands — help to carry the story forward and give it its sense of magic and excitement.

Thank you for sharing your beautiful story in The Ink Well and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members.

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I've come to know about this genre in this community. I used to write like this but I didn't know what it was called until I read it here. Thank you for your continuous knowledge and opportunity.

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I believe in guardinas, but it seems I had such moments more often when I was child but since grown up seems to be less. Nevertheless, it is exciting to know that sometimes there is something or maybe someone who looks after us. The story well written I like the dialogs, I can feel how that showed the character of of a child.

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Thank you so much for reading. I think children tend to have it more because of their innocence. As we become older, the world rips off innocence. Nevertheless, I believe we are being protected.

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I really like how imaginative this story is, @kei2. It takes us to another place entirely! I love the magical quality of the story, and how the hooded woman represents several things, including (I think!), her mother and a spirit guide. Well done!

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Thank you for reading my work. I'm glad it had such an impression on you.

Yes! The hooded woman represented those things in Amina’s life. She'd forever believe someone is watching over her.

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It's beautiful entering into your imaginative world
...I could get lost following all the step of the way... without actually knowing it, they're people watching over us...they do everything to ensure that we're okay..and in return we just need a little act of kindness..Great story... certainly enjoyed reading this ❤️

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Don't get lost🥰. Thank you. I believe so too. The currency we exchange for that is just a little act of kindness. I'm glad you liked it.

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What an interesting story.
Amina would be happy to pass such experience down her generational line.

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I'm sure she would have a thrill telling her story to the next generation. Perhaps they'd conclude it's a myth.

Thank you for reading.

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It would be a thrill for her to tell the stories in years. Perhaps they'd think it was made up. Thank you so much for reading.

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OMG, that’s truly one of the most beautiful stories I’ve ever, ever read. Stars personified, now who would think of such an amazing storyline - YOU WOULD. TOTALLY BRILLIANT 🤗🥰💕❤️💕🥰😊😊💕😉😉💕🥰🤗🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

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OMG. I'm so in awe. Thank you do much for reading. I'm really elated that you loved it this much. This made my day.

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This story caught my interest right from the beginning 🥰. Now, I have a stronger belief in the existence of personal guardians. They are always there to guide the person whom they were assigned to.

Amina's experiences with her guardian was fabulous. I enjoyed reading🥰🥰👍.
Came in through #dreemport.

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Awe how sweet. I'm so happy the story had an impression on you that way. I also believe we are being protected but we just don't see it.

Thank you for coming.

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Such an interesting story about Amina and the stars. Perhaps the star was her mom who came to protect her from those boys who snatched away her oranges.
Many times, we are always protected by our guardian Angel.

I popped in through Dreemport 🤗

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Yes. I believe in protection. Sometimes we don't even see the danger that is being averted coming. In Amina’s case, she met her guardian.

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Nice story dear ❤️
Keep up the good work 👍
Reading from @dreemport

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Thank you for stopping. I appreciate it.

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This is amazing! I love the star/ guardian angel/ old woman character- at first I thought somehow it would be her mom, but I know that wouldn't make sense in the end haha

Thank you for sharing this beautiful tale with us :)

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Thank you for reading. I almost played with the idea of making the guardian her mother but I concluded that it would be cliche. I'm glad it came out the way it did.

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I agree :) it was perfect 🌟

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What an interesting piece again!
You always have a way to get me glued to the screen and elated at the end of the story.
I love this story and it made me recalled that the star she left under her pillow was her guardian...who fought for her from the sky and watches her every move...
Nice one again...I waltzed in from #dreemport

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Thank you for coming and reading. I enjoyed that thrilling piece you gave us the last time as well. Please write more.
Yes! That star turned out to be the guardian that watches over her.

Much love.

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Write more hehe...I will try!
There's a superstitious belief that this is actually real...I meant the guardians...any clue??😍

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Lol

Well, I read them in fiction. Also, some religious scripts talk about types of angels. Guardian angels are inclusive.

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Oh cool...I would look that up maybe some other time... have a wonderful day...

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