Ben's Family || Microfiction Challenge

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Hello everyone! This is my entry to the Week 38 ZapFic Monday Story Challenge that requires participants to tell a complete story in just 240 characters (not words). Is it simple? Why not give this challenge a try?

You can participate by clicking here. The prompt for this week's challenge is "hospital".

Rules Of The Challenge

  • Story must be exactly 240 characters
  • Story must be posted to the Freewrite community
  • Drop a link to your entry in the comment section of the challenge post
  • Use tags #freewritehouse and #zapfic.
  • Attach a screenshot of your word count in your post.

Here is my short story. I hope you enjoy reading it.

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Growing up without family was painful for Ben. Now a doctor, he believed fate made him stop by the hospital on his day off.

He consulted on a special case and after some tests, he learned the patient was his uncle.

Finally, he had a family.

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Here's the screenshot of the word count...

Thanks for reading!



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Great story, short and sweet. Thanks for sharing.

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Awww fate sure did made him stop by the hospital that day... Lucky for him.

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This is nice 🥰.. It was fate that reunited them..
I heard a story about someone who got hospitalized.. He's poor and has no enough money for hospitalization. The doctor found out that they are relatives.. So all bills were paid by the doctor..that was a blessing.

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