Irving Street Reunion [Fiction]

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Justin stood at a distance and took a long drag from a cigarette, watching his long-lost sister. The deserted corner of Irving Street seemed the best place to meet her without drawing attention to himself and their mama.

She looked a little different from the thin, malnourished teenage girl he remembered as a child. Her bag pack and a white shopping bag leaned on the wall on which was painted the name of the gang in charge of the area—C.BRA. Perhaps she would stay a few days and run back to her city life, leaving them to the dangers of their impoverished neighbourhood.

Well, it wouldn't be the first time. He scowled and took another drag, the smoke swirling out of his nose and mouth. His bloodshot eyes gleamed with unshed tears. He flicked the cigarette and stepped on it, alerting his eldest sister to his presence.


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Irene glanced back and stood quickly, her bright, brown eyes, a little wide from the shock of seeing her baby brother. After fourteen years. “Hey Justin,” she whispered, walking towards him.

“It's JC.”

“W-what?”

Justin's frown deepened. “It's JC. Folks here call me JC, not Justin.”

“Oh.” Irene nodded like she understood. “How's Mama?” Justin stared at her for a while, the silence growing uncomfortable between them. “Say something.”

“You'll see for yourself. But why now? Why are you here?”

“What do you mean ‘why am I here'? Mama has my number and I told her to always call when you both needed something—”

“We don't need anything from you!”

Irene was startled for a moment before a scowl replaced her calm demeanour. “Don't you dare to speak to me like that.”

“Look, Irene. I'll speak to you however I want to,” he said, spreading out his arms. “You're no longer in your fancy city. This right here is my neighbourhood, my domain. So I'll urge you to be careful what you say to me.”

Irene scoffed and shook her head. “I don't have time for this. Take me to Mama immediately. I'm taking her to a better hospital.”

“And if I say no?” Justin drew closer to his sister. Irene grabbed the front of his sweatshirt in a fist hold, surprising him. She bared her teeth at him. “At nineteen, I would think you'd have some sense in that head of yours but I see you're still a baby. If she dies, her death is on you!” She let go of his shirt and he stepped back, the crease revealing how tightly she held it.

Brother and sister stared at each other for a long moment before Justin pushed his hands into the pocket of his baggy jeans and began to swagger away. Irene picked up her bags and followed after him.

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Nothing much had improved on Irving Street. It was still unkempt, with dirt littering every corner, and every wall was inked with terrifying graffiti of beasts and names of the gangs in the neighbourhood. A few men formed small groups in front of houses and shops, watching and waiting. Some of them hailed Justin and he replied with two fingers raised, denoting a peace sign. Their response was a nod.

Irene followed quietly, avoiding the people's gaze. She hated that she was back to this slum but there was no other choice—her mother was dying of cancer. Her doctor had assured her of a spot on a clinical trial list, and she was willing to get her mother into it. Even if it meant returning to her birthplace, a place she detested.

Nothing had changed about their one-room apartment in the dilapidated three-storey building. Irene sighed deeply before entering. Justin smirked and waved his hand towards the bed in the dark, musty corner where their mother lay, the sound of her wheezing echoing in the room.

Irene knelt beside her, gently holding her frail hand. “Mama? It's me, Irene,” she whispered.

“Uh, she may not hear you. I gave her something for the pain,” Justin mumbled behind her. Irene knew what that meant and almost cried. Perhaps she had stayed away for too long. She wanted no part of this life and told her mother so fourteen years ago after Justin was born. Her mother begged her to stay. After six years, she packed her things and left for the city.

“Mama?” She shook her gently. Her mother groaned and slowly blinked her eyes open.

“My...baby,” Amara whispered, attempting to smile at the sight of her daughter. Irene sniffed, recalling she had always been the ‘baby’ until Justin came along, born from a narcissistic man who almost killed their mother if not for the intervention of neighbours.

“Yes, mama. I'm here to take you to the city with me. You'll get better treatment.”

Justin scoffed. “That will be a waste of time. She's getting better, I tell—”

“Shut up! Just be quiet.”

“Hey, hey…you're both my babies…no fighting please….” Amara broke into a fit of coughing, the sound jarring in their ears. Irene gently massaged her forearm to calm her. “I…. when?”

“Tonight, Mama. A car will come pick us up,” she paused and glanced at Justin, “all of us and take us to the airstrip where a chopper will be waiting.”

Justin chuckled. “Trying to bribe me with your fancy life? I'm staying right here on Irving Street.”

“Please....JC,” Amara pleaded and coughed some more.

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A few hours later as the chopper took off into the air, Amara sedated and strapped in comfortably on a stretcher, Irene mourned her brother and wished he didn't hate her so much.

Maybe someday, he would learn to let go of the hard feelings and try to understand her decisions. But for now, their mama's health was a priority.

What I See

A lady seated on a concrete slab in a deserted street corner, probably looking through her phone from her slightly bowed posture. She may be waiting for someone. Two bags I assume belong to her lean on a nearby wall painted with graffiti C.BRA

What I Feel

The lady is sad.

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I can feel the family dynamics; the insults; the jealousy; the condemnation; and the pity. Irene returned to her home in the poor neighborhood to help her mother against the wishes of her brother, Justin. She hoped he would have changed, but see that he still holds a bit of jealousy, perhaps, for her leaving them and making a better life for herself.

The love of family is there. However, the underlying issues creates a tension between the siblings. Irene's offer to take them out of the neighborhood is met with resistance perhaps because Justin feels guilty he hasn't been able to care for his mother as expected.

Irene made the right choice to put her mother's needs first. She can deal with her brother later once he realizes his mother's health is more important than his feelings of inadequacy in caring for her since apparently he doesn't have the resources. I've personally witnessed this type of sibling interaction. At the heart of the issues lies jealousy. Justin may have desired to have a better life for himself, but didn't know how to accomplish it.

Beautiful story full of tension and emotion. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing. Take care.

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At the heart of the issues lies jealousy.

You're absolutely right! I too have witnessed a similar interaction between siblings and it was way uglier than this. If the goal is a common one—to get Mama better healthcare and treatment—why fight each other? Justin's mindset is restricted by his neighbourhood and anyone from outside it is an enemy trying to show off their 'better life'. Hehe.

Thanks so much for reading and the compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Take care and have a great day! !LADY 💕

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I recognize it because I lived it. "You think you're better than us" just because...

How can I be better than you when we all grew up in the same house. I got up each day to head out to work (riding transit both ways 6x/week) to better myself and my immediate family. Bottom line!

It's sad because trying to get important issues accomplished (as with parents' health) is like pulling teeth. You're met with opposition at every turn.

Thanks for the relatable story that hit home deeply.

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I often tell people, "do you", regardless of what other people say. When they refuse to see the bigger picture (a common goal) and imagine the worse, statements like "You think you're better...etc" will pop out! Hehe. Thanks for sharing your experience. 😊

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As my mother used to say, "if it's in you, it's got to come out." Take care.

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This was so mournful to read for some reason. It represents hope, longing, hatred and revulsion. All in one space. I loved the burst of emotions and how realistically everything seemed to piece together. Really beautiful, Kemmy. You write the most soulful things.♥️

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Thanks so much for the compliment. Indeed family situations like this fuel nothing but hatred born out of misunderstanding. If only Justin would think reasonably and see that his sister is concerned for their welfare. Thanks again for the visit. !LADY 🙂

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It's not hard to understand why Justin hates his sister.
Not sure how rich and famous she became a helicopter picks them up in such a neighbourhood but I hope it all works out well.

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Yes, Justin misunderstands his sister and feels threatened, especially considering his lifestyle in that neighbourhood. I'll say Irene has some money, enough to get a chopper for her mother. Hehe. Thanks so much for reading. !LUV

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It's hard to be abandoned by your big sister...

A great read. Thanks for your entry.

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Thanks so much for organising the contest. 🙂

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Justin could have learnt to love his sister after all. She wouldn't have been able to afford her mom's treatment if she didn't make up the choice to leave then for a better life away from the poor life she was living in that slum. I could feel the love in there as she was back to care for her mother. Well, I guess she would come back for Justin once Amara is okay.
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She wouldn't have been able to afford her mom's treatment if she didn't make up the choice to leave then for a better life away...

It would have been great if Justin saw it from this point of view but instead he's blinded by jealousy. Hehe. Thanks so much for reading. !LADY 🙂

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Justin's heart is filled with Jealousy towards his sister because part of him wished he has what she now have.

I hope he will let go of his pride and reach out to her in future but for now I wish their mum will be able to beat the cancer.

Thank you for sharing this.

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I hope he will let go of his pride and reach out to her in future...

I hope so too, at least to check up on his mother and know she's doing okay. Thanks so much for reading. !LADY 🙂

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A very interesting read🙌

The life in C.BRA looks dangerous for JC even though he claims to belong to the street

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Indeed it looks dangerous and JC must be used to it. Maybe that's the reason he refused to leave with his sister and mother. Thanks so much for your visit. !PIZZA

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