RE: The Saga of Salvation

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What a haunting and powerful story! You effectively capture the emotion and desperation in Saga's final moments. Too bad the same people Saga believed in failed her.

"Shagged me goat!" collides into "Gave my husband the wanderin' eyes!".

🤣 I couldn't help laughing at this part. Couldn't Candace come up with something authentic?

And Chett? Watch out for that being! This is a beautifully written piece. You had me on the edge of my seat all through. I admire the way you combine elements of fear, heartbreak, and tragedy to create a memorable and impactful narrative.
!LUV

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This is such a fantastic comment, thank you so much for the time you took here! 💚 There's something unparalleled about having another great author offer a positive critique on your story... It's my favorite part of Hive 😁! You really made me smile! 🤗

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