The School Proprietor | Freewrite

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"Ouch!" I wriggled my fingers and sucked my pinky finger as I hurriedly climb the stairs leading to the school staff room. My cup of hot tea swayed a little and some tea poured on my fingers. Hmm, tasted like the sugar may be a tad too much.

"Mrs Anya! You are late." A dark voice grumbled, distracting me from the taste of my tea. It was the school proprietor. A tall, fit and brooding man.

He stood by the door to the staff room, arms crossed on his chest and glared through his eyeglasses down his nose at me. I was tempted to roll my eyes at him for his thoughtless attitude in addressing me properly.

I stopped beside him and sighed. "It's Miss, not Mrs. Sorry I'm late. I'm here now."

His brows inched up a little at my audacity and response. He removed his glasses and said, "Your pupils are anxiously waiting in their classroom."

For a moment, I froze. I stared into his deep-set, brown eyes. Probably the eyeglasses took the attention off his eyes but without them, he had such beautiful eyes.

"Mrs Anya?"

I blinked quickly, a little embarrassed at staring. "Y-yes. Of course. Heading to the class now."

I started to walk away, gritted my teeth and turned to look at him. "It's Miss, not Mrs!" I said and walked away to start my first day as a substitute teacher to kindergarten children.

Thoughts of a pair of deep-set, brown eyes filled my mind. My curiosity would not be sated until I know the man behind those beautiful, brown eyes.

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I hope you enjoyed reading my piece. This short story is a five-minute freewrite inspired by the prompt "brown eyes". Join the @freewriters community to receive daily prompts, hosted by @mariannewest.

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Great piece.
I'm a writer too.
Hope you could read mine

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Thank you.
I would love to read your piece.

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This is a really great freewrite post, and I really enjoyed reading it.

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This was interesting to read, Romance is definitely brewing.

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Hehe, yes. Romance is certainly brewing if she can convince the 'brooding' man to look beyond his nose! 😅
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😆 I believe she can, all good romance start with a head strong person.

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Perfectly written. I hope she gets to know the man behind the beautiful brown eyes soon enough lest she breaks her ankle when she figures after a long while that he's perfectly married. Lol.

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😅 Well, for her sake, I hope he's not married. Hehe, thanks for your funny comment. I hope you are doing great.

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For her sake?? Lol. I'm actually doing great. Thank you so much for asking 🥰

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Haha! I love this story! Mrs Anya is about to be on a curious adventure! I enjoyed reading your freewrite. Well done!

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Thanks a lot for reading. You know the saying - curiosity killed the cat. I hope her curiosity will not get her in trouble! 😄

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Sizzling with tension. One wonders how far her curiosity will take her. :)

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Mhm, she seems determined and determined people kind of get what they want most times! 😁
Thanks for your visit.

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Mhm, she seems determined and determined people kind of get what they want most times!

Or they get what they need. :)

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I enjoyed this story,and I curious too to know how your main character will get to know her school proprietor. But first she should concentrate on teaching the kids very well,abeg. 😁

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Lol, exactly. She should deal with her job first and attend to her curiosity later.
Thanks dear for stopping by. 🙂

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