The error seen late. POEM.
The error seen late.
You have nothing to reproach her for
because you are to blame for everything.
She gave you her whole life,
her trust, her faith and her love,
but you never valued her
as a wife who gave you her heart.
The parties with your dear friends
hurt you both so much
and she was in the background
with only obligations and duties
and the situation became very strong.
You never gave him again
not even a birthday present
or a flower on Mother's Day
and she silenced her sadness
because she dared not say
anythingand the house was emptying
even when you could stay.
She understood that it was time
to leave that place,
and when he noticed his mistake,
it was too late.
All you have to do is learn the lesson
because she will not return
and now you will have by your side
a frank love, a beautiful love.
And she will fly free through life
with the protection of God.
Greetings poet, after reading your poem and analyzing it this was what I could appreciate from your creative work:
It seemed to me that the poem speaks to the complexities of love and relationships, where the poet seems to be reflecting on past mistakes and regretting the way a former partner may have been treated. The tone of the poem suggests a sense of remorse, as the remorseful person realizes that it is too late to make amends and win back his or her partner. The poem seems to be an attempt to reconcile with past mistakes and move on to a new chapter of life that includes a new appreciation for love and relationships.
Thank you for sharing quality poetry.
Certainly, you have written everything with precission of reality.
A lesson to value the people in our lives and to appreciate them before it's too late.
Although, a relationship is all about communicating. Rather than silencing your heart, you should yell it out imo
Most times, regret comes a little too late. An important lesson to learn not to take for granted the people we have in our lives.
Sometimes, we fail to appreciate the people who dedicate their time to us. The people who were there in our lowest hours . The people who stood by us when the world was against us.
Sometimes it's always to late as these people depart from us because of our lack of gratitude. We should learn to be more appreciative of the people around us.
This was a nice piece ✨