RE: The Divers
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Interesting buildup with the way you write. It's as if something huge should come next.
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Interesting buildup with the way you write. It's as if something huge should come next.
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Hmm ā¦ maybe I need to add something to the ending.
Yh you could, because the more I read it , it feels like things are getting intensified and all of a sudden it ended. I was kinda expecting more.
It's quite a dramatic piece to me š
Don't you dare.