A Moment In Time ~ BCP Prompt

Banged!
A loud scoring sharp pain,
Caressed my neck region,
It was the hit of a full-grown,
Urging to crawl me,
Would you wait of fight back?
There was not option left,
My heels I obeyed to elope.
Yeah!! I did escape into thing air.

As quick as my body can carry,
We moved swiftly into hiding,
A huge creature has attacked,
Body, soul and spirit,
The head spoke to the legs,
Graciously they obeyed,
What was conveyed from the brain,
He who fights and runs away,
Live to fight another day.

Look back in anger,
That was what I was told,
By a lazy colleague with weak bones,
Then I ministered to myself,
If this fight broke out,
Who will calm us down?
Not the weak brother,
One who has been instigating,
Fight, fight, fight your problem,
As if live must end with it.

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I did look back,
Not in anger as was proposed,
A heavy smile my face to share,
The wild brother,
Who had landed heavy blows,
Waiting for me to respond,
Choked himself in the neck,
When he further saw me smile,
Not that his punches weren't painful,
I made up my mind to swallow it,
Hook, line and sinker.
He is my brother,
An older one for all I care,
But,
When brothers fight each other,
Strangers inherits their wealth.



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I am glad to have arrived here, between confusion, anger, desires, a life is built.

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Desires pushes you,
Anger drives you,
Confusion sets you up,
All these makes a dose of life out of you.

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Very nice poem has a bit of everything and it is or I like it as a reader, because it is a bit confusing but at the same time very good, thanks for sharing it.

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Thanks, dear friend. The heart knows where the words come from and what they are meant for the time they are constructed.

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Nice to read your text. It really represents those confrontations that we all have in life. Hit or be hit that is the question.
Thanks for sharing.
Good day

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Thanks for your great comment.
I hope that All humans will not be consumed by the many challenges that confront them.

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Poetry that leads us to a relationship between nature and man, a dependence and closeness, hunting and the need to survive.

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