Creative Nonfiction : Chilón (ENG/ ESP)


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Chilón

I was coming home from school when my older sister said to me:

"Chilon died"_ she expressed frightened as if that death was contagious or a secret. I tried to go to Chilón's house, which was right in front of our house, but my sister stopped me and explained in the same tone:

"There they are all there: papa, mama and maíta. They said we couldn't go there. They said we would be punished if we went". -Then I decided to go to the front window of the house and from there I could look towards Chilón's house.

Chilón was the owner of the only bodega on the block. He was a fat man, about 40 years old, kind, loving, helpful. He had never known a wife or girlfriend. He lived with his elderly parents and his job was to tend the bodega, where he spent at least 20 hours a day.

"Mr. Chilón, sell me a packet of flour, a kilo of cambur and 3 loaves of bread" - I could ask him standing at the counter. And Chilón would give me the items and then tell me a riddle:

"I have needles and I can't sew, I have numbers and I can't read! What could it be?"

"The watch," I would guess, and Chilón would give me a piece of candy or a piece of fruit, anything. But if I didn't guess, he would leave me empty-handed.

"You'll win tomorrow," he would say, and the next day I wanted to run errands to see if I would win something.


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I never knew what his real name was, Chilón. That was his nickname and that's how everyone knew him. That's why when they said that Chilón had killed himself, the whole neighbourhood came to his house, or at least that's what I saw from the window that day: a million people in that tiny, humble house.

After Chilón's death there was a rumour that his spirit was wandering around the neighbourhood. Several people said they had seen him at night and had even dreamt of him.

"It's as if he was in pain!" -People would say mass and prayers at Chilón's house, and they even had holy water poured over all the houses on the block.

"You have to be careful, when people die like that, they have no rest and wander until they find their way," my grandmother used to say to my parents, and no matter how much I asked what they were talking about, my grandmother scolded me and definitively said without the possibility of commenting:

"How many times have you been told that it's bad to get involved in the conversations of adults? You start listening and then you can't sleep!" -my grandmother would predict as if she could see my nightmares and my fears.

And indeed, one night I dreamt of Chilon and I had a high fever. In the dream he told me a riddle and I didn't know how to answer, so I started to cry. From that day on, they put a red ribbon on the back of my bed and they put a little red ribbon on my left hand. When I asked why they had done that, they simply said, in a worried way:

"You were saying Chilon's name last night, over and over again in your sleep. So we're going to put this on you to scare away the bad spirits!" - They also forbade me to take it off or to touch it. That little red ribbon was the subject of incredible stories that I would tell my little friends at playtime.


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But one day, I think a year had passed since Chilón's death, when an event reaffirmed the rumours of Chilón's spirit. A group of men, who had been friends of the deceased, went to the river to fish for guaraguara. It is said that as soon as they left their homes, they said: "Here the one who is needed is Chilón:

"Here the one who is needed is Chilón, he was always fun".

Later, when they were in the car, they remembered:

"It was better when Chilón was around. He always told a joke, made a riddle" - and that's how they stayed the whole trip. They say that when they got into the river, they kept remembering him:

"If Chilón were here, he would be having fun"_ they kept talking about the deceased.

Suddenly, one of them felt a sharp pain and put his hand to his chest. They were all in the river, so they swam out to help the man, who gave a piercing and pitiful cry. As best they could, they pulled him out of the river and began to resuscitate him, but the man was unresponsive. When they were about to take him to the car to transfer him to the hospital, the man opened his eyes as if looking at a fixed point in the sky, laughed and said clearly, as if what he saw gave him great joy:

"Chilon, my friend"_ -and then, they say, he let out his last sigh.

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Chilón
Venía de la escuela, cuando mi hermana mayor me dijo:
_Chilón se mató –expresó asustada como si aquella muerte fuera contagiosa o un secreto. Yo intenté ir a la casa de Chilón que justo estaba frente a la casa de nosotros, pero mi hermana me detuvo y me explicó en el mismo tono:
_Allá están todos: papá, mamá y maíta. Dijeron que no podíamos ir para allá. Que nos castigarían si íbamos. –entonces decidí ir hasta la ventana frontal de la casa y desde allí mirar hacia la casa de Chilón.
Chilón era el dueño de la única bodega que había en la cuadra. Era un hombre gordo, de unos 40 años, amable, cariñoso, servicial. Nunca se le conoció esposa ni novia. Vivía con sus padres ancianos y su trabajo era atender aquella bodega en la que pasaba, por lo menos, 20 horas al día.
_Señor Chilón, me vende un paquete de harina, un kilo de cambur y 3 panes –podía pedirle yo paradita en el mostrador. Y Chilón me daba los artículos y luego me decía una adivinanza:
_¡Tengo agujas y no sé coser, tengo números y no sé leer! ¿Qué será?
_El reloj –adivinaba y Chilón me regalaba un caramelo o una fruta, cualquier cosa. Pero si no adivinaba, me dejaba con las manos vacías.
_Ganarás mañana –decía y al día siguiente, yo quería hacer los mandados para ver si ganaba algo.
Nunca supe cómo se llamaba realmente Chilón. Ese era su apodo y así todos lo conocían. Por eso cuando dijeron que Chilón se había matado, todo el barrio llegó hasta su casa o por lo menos eso fue lo que yo vi desde la ventana ese día: un millón de personas en aquella casa pequeñita y humilde.
A raíz de la muerte de Chilón se creó el rumor de que su espíritu vagaba por todo el barrio. Varios decían que lo habían visto por las noches y hasta habían soñado con él.
_¡Es como si tuviera penando! –afirmaba la gente y hacían misa, rezos en la casa de Chilón y hasta mandaron a echar agua bendita por todas las casas de la cuadra.
_Hay que tener cuidado, cuando las personas mueren así, no tienen descanso y vagan hasta que encuentran el camino –decía mi abuela a mis padres y por más que preguntaba de qué hablaban, mi abuela me regañaba y de manera definitiva decía sin posibilidad de comentario:
_¿Cuántas veces te han dicho que es malo meterse en las conversaciones de las personas adultas? ¡Te pones a escuchar y después no puedes dormir! -vaticinaba mi abuela como si pudiera ver mis pesadillas y mis miedos.
Y efectivamente, una noche soñé con Chilón y me dio mucha fiebre. En el sueño él me decía una adivinanza y yo no sabía responder, por lo que me ponía a llorar. Desde ese día, al espaldar de mi cama le pusieron un lazo rojo y a mí me pusieron una cintita roja en la mano izquierda. Cuando pregunté por qué habían hecho eso, simplemente dijeron, de manera preocupada:
_Anoche estabas diciendo el nombre de Chilón, una y otra vez mientras dormías ¡Así que te vamos a poner esto para espantar los malos espíritus! – también me prohibieron que me la quitara o que me la tocaran. Esa cintita roja fue motivo de historias increíbles que yo les contaba a mis amiguitas en horas de recreo.
Pero cierto día, creo que había pasado un año desde la muerte de Chilón, un acontecimiento puntual vendría a reafirmar los rumores del espíritu de Chilón. Un grupo de hombres, que habían sido amigos del difunto, se fue al río a pescar guaraguara. Dicen que desde que salieron de sus casas, decían:
_Aquí el que hace falta es Chilón, él siempre era divertido.
Más adelante, cuando iban en el carro, recordaron:
_Era mejor cuando Chilón estaba. Siempre contaba un chiste, hacía una adivinanza –y así estuvieron en todo el viaje. Dicen que cuando se metieron en el río, siguieron recordándolo:
_Si Chilón estuviera aquí, se estaría divirtiendo –seguían hablando del difunto.
De repente, a uno de ellos le dio un fuerte dolor y se llevó la mano en el pecho. Todos estaban dentro del río, por lo que nadaron para socorrer al hombre quien pegó un grito desgarrador y lastimero. Como pudieron, lo sacaron del río y empezaron a reanimarlo, pero nada que el hombre reaccionaba. Cuando iban a llevarlo al carro para trasladarlo al hospital, el hombre abrió los ojos como mirando un punto fijo, en el cielo, se rió y dijo claro, como si lo que viera, le diera una gran alegría:
_Chilón –y luego, dicen, largó el último suspiro.




































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This is a gripping, tragic, and well told story about the spirit of Chilon. The opening of the tale is very strong because it's shocking and intriguing from the very beginning:

I was coming home from school when my older sister said to me:
"Chilon died"_ she expressed frightened as if that death was contagious or a secret.

I think that it is interesting how your story references cultural beliefs like the red ribbon.

From that day on, they put a red ribbon on the back of my bed and they put a little red ribbon on my left hand.

I have heard of other cultures throughout Latin America that also use a red ribbon for different purposes like keeping a pregnant woman safe during an eclipse or to protect a newborn child.

I enjoyed reading your story from beginning to end. Well done!

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My grandmother was a Cumanagoto Indian so I grew up hearing and believing stories of spirits and ghosts. You know I admire your writing, so your comment is an honor for me. Greetings

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My grandmother was a Cumanagoto Indian so I grew up hearing and believing stories of spirits and ghosts

This is very interesting. The blend of cultures in Latin America has led to some fascinating beliefs in spirits and ghosts. In North America, we also have beliefs like the Sasquatch and Wendigo, which are both of indigenous origin but are also part of our culture in general. Thank you for sharing!

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There are stories that seem like fantasy, but really happen in reality, a clear example is the experience you tell us as a child. I really liked how you narrated your experience with all the beliefs and myths that arise about impressive facts.

Thanks for sharing your experience with us.

Happy day.

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Part of our mestizo culture, between blacks and Indians, makes us have beliefs that may not be so well known to Western culture. Someone said "real wonderful" to talk about this side of the world. Greetings and a nice day to you too.

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Superb. You capture the innocence of youth and the culture of a community. While readers are inclined to dismiss the belief that Chilon wanders, the last line of the story belies that skepticism. The story is lyrical and moving.

Thank you for sharing this with us, @nancybriti1.

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For those who read and make literature, any world is possible. Thanks to my paternal family, I grew up believing that windows can be eyes, walls can have ears and that you don't need wings to fly. Grateful for your support and comments. Greetings

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This is such a tragedy tale. Chilón was loved by the dwellers of the neighborhood from the way everybody missed him.
The wandering spirit of Chilón is a usual occurrence in African folklore, where mortals and spirits share some common bond, typically when they have close blood ties.

Great story.

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