Creative nonfiction: The box


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The box

_Be careful with that box! -my grandmother said in an authoritative tone. My sisters and I were playing hide and seek and I had tried to get under the table. With the scolding, we all froze when the idea was to look for a place to hide. My eyes went straight to a small black box on the table. Although that box was ordinary, my grandmother's words awakened a curiosity in me: What would be inside that box?

As if I had never seen it before, the box began to exist for me from that moment on. Many times I tried to open it, but my grandmother's eyes stopped my action as if she had a paralyzing power in her gaze:

_Leave that box where it is. Don't touch it," my grandmother would order every time she saw me near the table.

_I'm just watching, Grandma," I lied as only children can lie: with a laughing naiveté.


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The little box was closed with a small iron clasp. Around it, there was always a glass of water, half full; there was also a green bottle with a minty smell and some ointments that were useful for insect bites, asthma and headaches. My eyes did not stop on any of the other objects on the table, not even on the little virgin with a sad look that had a child in her arms, only on that box that at first sight had nothing special, but in my imagination, it kept a great secret.

I think I dreamt several times about that box. In each dream I was looking for the box and it disappeared. Also, on several occasions, I thought of opening it behind my grandmother's back, but fear and respect for the order I had been given did not allow me to carry out my plans.


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Eventually, my grandmother, who had lived with us all her life, went to her youngest daughter's house because she had asked her to help her take care of the children. Since we, all females, were grown up, she gladly accepted the invitation. In the move, my grandmother took all her things with her, including that little black plastic box.

As the months went by, my father was told that my grandmother had fallen in the bathroom and could not get up. Since my aunt could not notice her, my father brought her back into the house.

As a result of the blow, my grandmother hardly spoke, we gave her liquid food and she had to get up with help. Although we did everything we could to keep her from being sad, my grandmother began to fade like a candle goes out. Bedridden, she lasted a month. She died on the 4th of July, in the morning, and I was 15 years old.


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After the funeral, we all went home heartbroken. The next day, my aunt arrived in her car and said she had taken all my grandmother's things in case my dad wanted to keep them. My dad took the bags and took them to my grandmother's old room and there he began to take out each piece. As he took out my grandmother's belongings, I visualized the little box among other items and all the memories tightened in my chest and mind.

_I want to keep this box," I said, grabbing the box quickly. My father exchanged glances with my mother and asked me:

_Do you know what is inside that box?

_No, but I want to keep it," I said confidently.

_Open it," my father ordered me. I was afraid to open it, because I still remembered my grandmother's order. However, I uncovered it. My surprise was great: inside was a set of teeth. They were my grandmother's teeth. After the initial surprise, I burst into tears. After all, there was a treasure inside the box and I had kept it. I had kept my grandmother's smile.


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La caja
_¡Cuidado con esa caja! -expresó mi abuela con tono autoritario. Mis hermanas y yo jugábamos a las escondidas y yo había intentado meterme debajo de la mesa. Con el regaño, todas nos quedamos paralizadas cuando la idea era buscar un lugar para escondernos. Mis ojos fueron directo a una pequeña caja negra que estaba sobre la mesa. Aunque aquella caja era común y corriente, las palabras de mi abuela despertaron una curiosidad en mí ¿Qué habría dentro de aquella caja?

Como si nunca la hubiese visto antes, la caja comenzó a existir para mí a partir de ese instante. Muchas veces intenté abrirla, pero los ojos de mi abuela detenían mi acción como si tuviera un poder paralizante en la mirada:

_Deja esa caja donde está. No la toques -ordenaba mi abuela cada vez que me veía cerca de la mesa.

_Yo solo estoy viendo, abuela -mentía como solo pueden mentir los niños: con una ingenuidad que daba risa.

La cajita estaba cerrada con un pequeño broche de hierro. Alrededor de ella, había siempre un vaso con agua, medio lleno; también había un frasco verde con olor mentolado y unos ungüentos que servían para picaduras de insectos, asma y dolor de cabeza.
Mis ojos no se detenían en ninguno de los otros objetos encima de la mesa, ni siquiera en la virgencita con mirada triste que tenía un niño en los brazos, solo en aquella caja que a simple vista no tenía nada de especial, pero que en mi imaginación, guardaba un gran secreto.

Creo haber soñado varias veces con aquella caja. En cada sueño yo buscaba la caja y ésta desaparecía. También, en varias oportunidades, pensé abrirla a escondida de mi abuela, pero el miedo y el respeto a la orden que me habían dado no me dejaban llevar a cabo mis planes.

Con el tiempo, mi abuela, que había vivido toda su vida con nosotros, se fue para la casa de su hija menor porque ésta le había pedido que la ayudara a cuidar a los niños. Como ya nosotras, todas hembras, estábamos grandes, ella aceptó la invitación gustosamente. En la mudanza, mi abuela se llevó todas sus cosas, incluso aquella cajita negra de plástico.

Con los meses, le avisaron a mi padre que mi abuela se había caído en el baño y que no podía levantarse. Como mi tía no podía darse cuenta de ella, mi padre la llevó nuevamente a la casa.

A raíz del golpe, mi abuela casi ni hablaba, le dábamos comída líquida y se tenía que levantar con ayuda. Aunque hicimos lo imposible para que ella no estuviera triste, mi abuela se fue apagando como se apaga una vela. Postrada en la cama, duró un mes. Murió un 4 de julio, por la mañana y yo tenía 15 años.

Después de los actos fúnebres, volvimos a casa todos desconsolados. Al día siguiente, mi tía llegó en su carro y dijo que había llevado todas las cosas de mi abuela por si mi papá se quería quedar con ellas. Mi padre tomó los bolsos y los llevó a la antigua habitación de mi abuela y allí comenzó a sacar cada pieza. Mientras él sacaba las pertenencias de mi abuela, yo visualicé la cajita entre otros objetos y todos los recuerdos se apretaron en el pecho y en la mente.

_Yo quiero quedarme con esta cajita -dije yo, agarrando la caja rápidamente. Mi padre intercambió la mirada con mi madre y me preguntó:

_¿Tú sabes lo que hay dentro de esa caja?

_No, pero quiero quedarme con ella -expresé de manera segura.

_Ábrela -ordenó mi padre. Yo tuve miedo de abrirla, porque aun recordaba la orden de mi abuela. Sin embargo, la destapé. Mi sorpresa fue mayúscula: adentro estaba una dentadura. Era la dentadura de mi abuela. Después de la sorpresa inicial, me puse a llorar. Al final, si era un tesoro lo que guardaba la caja y yo me había quedado con él. Yo me había quedado con la sonrisa de mi abuela.


















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It seems like grandma used to be a disciplinarian for you to have still feared opening the box even after her death.
Such a lovely story, and I'm really sorry for the loss too

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Children's curiosity is insistent by nature. Very funny the contents of that box, making this family story enjoyable to read. Congratulations!

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Thank you very much and I'm glad you liked the story.

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Interesting. I would also be curious to see what is in the box but grandma didn't allow you when she was still alive. At least you kept the treasure so well in her absence.

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That's right, and I still have the box. I still have that little box. Greetings

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You tell us this tale with so much heartfelt nostalgia that it captivates our hearts. Your grandmother would’ve been very proud of this lovely tribute you’ve made to her. Her smile will, forever, live on.

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Very excited with your comment because yes, I'm sure "maíta" would be very proud of me. Thank you infinite

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Que linda historia, nunca imaginé ese final, pero que interpretación tan magistral, el secreto era tener la sonrisa de tu abuela para siempre en tus recuerdos. Tenía que leerla hasta el final. Saludos.

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