Fiction: Andy's bicycle (ENG/ ESP)


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Andy's bicycle

That was such a poor village that it only had its people, who were in charge of planting and raising animals to feed themselves: they raised chickens in the corrals of the houses, vegetables were sown in the conucos and bread was baked in the wood oven. They lit themselves with candles made of grease and fetched water from a spring a few kilometers away. But beyond those limitations, those people were happy.

Because it was a town with so many shortages, no one passed through it. That is why, when the people of the town knew that in a few days, the competitors of the XXI San Isidro Tournament bicycle race would pass through there, the people were very excited. They started to make colorful banners, flower garlands and even wooden benches to sit on to watch the cyclists:

It's a very special event, some said.

_We should receive them as they deserve, said others.

_They are surely very important people, they all pointed out.

But Andy, who was a quiet boy, who had never been to school, only thought about the bicycles. He had never seen one in his life. In the village there were only animals like donkeys and horses, and since everything was so close by, nobody needed a car. Only when they needed to leave town for an emergency, like when Alirio went to college, a big car came and took him away.

Bicycles are slower than cars," Conchita had told Andy. And they are very pretty colors. Some of them have flowered seats.

Andy had been born sietemesino so he had always been very sickly, pale, slow, weak looking and flighty. Someone had told Agustina that Andy was not like other children:

All children are different, Agustina had sentenced as a mother and nobody else had touched her on the subject.

Also Conchita, Andy's sister, had become the child's shadow and had even fought with the other children when they had teased her brother:

I'm here to defend you, Andy, said Conchita in Andy's ear and Andy smiled oblivious to everything, trying to catch with his hand a particle of dust that was lost in the wind.


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A few days before the event, uniformed men arrived in a truck and set up a large billboard at the entrance of the town, promoting the big cycling event. People admired the billboard with eyes of joy and surprise:

_Now they really took us into account -said one.

This will attract tourists," commented another.

They were very optimistic and enthusiastic, but the one who was most happy was Andy who was jumping and clapping his hands, saying only one word:

_Bicycle, bicycle?

That's a bicycle, Andy," said Conchita, pointing to the iron and aluminum object with shiny wheels. The boy looked at the fence and smiled with small eyes and tilted his head as if the sun was hitting his face, "This one doesn't have a basket with flowers, but there are some that have baskets and they are prettier," continued Conchita describing to Andy what she saw. Every day, from the time he woke up until he went to sleep, Andy spent his time looking at the fence and every time he saw it, an easy smile would come to his face:

Bicycle, bicycle, he would repeat to everyone he passed, as he pointed to the image with his finger.


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On the day of the event, everyone got up very early and set up on the only main road in town. Since they did not know at what time the cyclists would pass by, they stayed there all day with their colorful banners and their bouquets of flowers under the sun. In the afternoon, when they were about to give up, they heard a noise coming from far away. Immediately, they immediately took up their positions again and prepared to watch, whistle and applaud the competitors.

Within minutes, the noise arrived: trucks with music, people with loudspeakers and a number of cyclists speeding along. The townspeople barely had time to clap, shout or watch the spectacle. Andy's little eyes opened like two plates trying to take it all in, but it was all so fast, as fast as an uncontrolled bicycle.

Although everything lasted a second, it excited the people, who were used to nothing happening in town, felt that this ephemeral or fleeting event was the event of the century.

The one in the red shirt is going to win the lap," commented some people.

The one on the blue bicycle will be the champion," said others.

The next day and the following days, the whole town was still talking about it. So much so that when the mayor's office came to remove the fence, people asked them to take it down, but to leave it at the main entrance, so that everyone would know that the cyclists had passed through there.

After that, it was not uncommon to see Andy riding on the fence as if that piece of wood was a bicycle, imitating the cyclists. Andy, as if pedaling, was looking straight ahead trying to reach the finish line and be the first to arrive. When people would look at him, Andy would smile and just say:

_bicycle, bicycle, bicycle...

And the people smiled, because even though there were many shortages, the people of that town were happy.

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Una bicicleta para Andy
Aquel era un pueblo tan pobre que solo tenía a su gente, la cual se encargaba de sembrar y criar animales para alimentarse: criaban pollos en los corrales de las casas, las verduras las sembraban en los conucos y el pan lo hacían en el horno de leña. Se alumbraban con velas hechas de grasa y el agua la buscaban en un manantial que estaba a algunos kilómetros. Pero más allá de aquellas limitaciones, aquella gente era feliz.

Por ser un pueblo con tantas carencias, nadie transitaba por allí. Por eso, cuando la gente del pueblo supo que en unos días, los competidores de la XXI vuelta en bicicleta, Torneo San Isidro, pasarían por allí, la gente se emocionó mucho. Empezaron a hacer banderines de colores, guirnaldas de flores y hasta unos banquitos de madera para sentarse a ver a los ciclistas:
_Es un acontecimiento muy especial, decían algunos.
_Debemos recibirlos como se merecen, comentaban otros.
_Seguro son personas muy importantes, señalaban todos.
Pero Andy que era un niño callado, que nunca había ido a la escuela, solo pensaba en las bicicletas. Nunca en su vida había visto una. En el pueblo solo había animales como los burros o los caballos, y como todo quedaba tan cerca, nadie tenía necesidad de carro. Solo cuando tenían necesidad de salir del pueblo por una emergencia, como cuando Alirio se fue a la universidad, vino un carro grande y se lo llevó:
_Las bicicletas son más lentas que los carros –le había dicho Conchita a Andy. Y son de colores muy bonitos. Algunas tienen cesticas con flores.
Andy había nacido sietemesino por lo que siempre había sido muy enfermizo, pálido, lento, de aspecto débil y mirada huidiza. Alguien le había dicho a Agustina que Andy no era igual a los otros niños:
_Todos los niños son diferentes –había sentenciado Agustina como madre y más nadie le había tocado el tema.
También Conchita, la hermana de Andy, se había convertido en la sombra del niño y hasta se había peleado con los otros niños cuando le habían echado broma a su hermano:
_Aquí estoy yo para defenderte, Andy –decía Conchita en el oído de Andy y este sonreía desentendido de todo, intentando atrapar con la mano una partícula de polvo que se perdía con el viento.
Unos días antes del evento, unos hombres uniformados llegaron en un camión y montaron, en la entrada del pueblo, una gran valla promocionando el gran evento ciclístico. La gente admiraba la valla con ojos de alegría y sorpresa:
_Ahora sí nos tomaron en cuenta –decía uno.
_Esto atraerá turistas –comentaba otro.
Estaban muy optimistas y entusiasmados, pero quien más se alegró fue Andy que saltaba y aplaudía, diciendo una sola palabra:
_Bicicleta, bicicleta…
_Esa es una bicicleta, Andy, le dijo Conchita señalando aquel objeto de hierro y aluminio, con ruedas brillantes. El niño miraba la valla y sonreía con unos ojos pequeños e inclinando la cabeza como si el sol le pegara en el rostro- Esta no tiene cestica con flores, pero hay algunas que tienen cesticas y son más bonitas –continuaba Conchita con su perorata describiéndole a Andy lo que veía. Todos los días, desde que se levantaba, hasta que se dormía, Andy pasaba su tiempo observando la valla y cada vez que la veía, una sonrisa fácil le salía:
_Bicicleta, bicicleta –repetía a todos los que pasaban, mientras señalaba la imagen con el dedo.
El día del evento, todos se levantaron muy temprano y se apostaron en la única vía principal que había en el pueblo. Como no sabían a qué hora pasarían los ciclistas, pues se quedaron allí todo el día con sus bambalinas de colores y sus ramilletes de flores debajo del sol. Ya en la tarde, cuando estaban a punto de darse por vencidos, escucharon un ruido que venía desde lejos. Inmediatamente se apostaron nuevamente y se prepararon para ver, pitar y aplaudir a los competidores.
En minutos llegó la bullaranga: camiones con música, personas con parlantes y una cantidad de ciclistas que iban a toda velocidad. A penas, las personas del pueblo tuvieron tiempo de aplaudir, gritar o ver el espectáculo. Los ojitos de Andy se abrían como dos platos intentando captar todo, pero todo fue tan rápido, tan veloz como una bicicleta descontrolada.
Aunque todo duró un segundo, aquello entusiasmó a la gente, quien acostumbrada a que no pasara nada en el pueblo, sintió que aquel acontecimiento tan efímero o fugaz, era el evento del siglo.
_El de camisa roja va a ganar la vuelta –comentaban unos
_El que iba en la bicicleta azul será el campeón –decían otros.
Al día siguiente y los otros días, todo el pueblo seguía hablando de aquello. Tanto así que cuando los de la alcaldía vinieron a retirar la valla, la gente pidió que la bajaran, pero que la dejaran en la entrada principal, para que todos supieran que los ciclistas habían pasado por allí.
Después de eso, no era raro ver a Andy montado sobre la valla como si aquel pedazo de madera fuera una bicicleta, imitando a los ciclistas. Andy, como si pedaleara, miraba al frente intentando alcanzar la meta y ser el primero en llegar. Cuando la gente lo miraba, Andy sonreía y solo decía:
_Bicicleta, bicicleta…
Y la gente sonreía, porque aunque con muchas carencias, la gente de aquel pueblo era feliz.







































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Hello, @nancybriti1

I really enjoyed your story. It captured my attention from beginning to end, more so as I felt the happiness of Andy and the whole town.

Greetings.

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Some things we see as little have in it source of happiness to others. I could imagine the joy in Andy when he saw the cyclists. A captivating story @nancybriti1.

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Yes, the child's gaze is innocent and finds wonder in simple things. Greetings

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I wish they stopped for a while and had fun with the people but no, that's how those racing events is. They pass like a flash 🤣

Nice story

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I remember that in my town there were always this kind of competitions and people were very enthusiastic. Greetings

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Wow! That's good. I haven't witnessed this. It'll be a joy to behold

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It's great how something as simple as a bicycle can bring so much joy to someone's life. Even though the village in your story had many shortages, the people were happy because they had each other. Just like the African proverb goes, "It takes a village to raise a child," in this case, it took a village to make Andy's dream of seeing a bicycle come true. Beautiful story, @nancybriti1

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The village life depicted here is so simple yet heartwarming. The excitement building up to the bicycle race and Andy's genuine fascination with the bikes make the story feel authentic. Even though the town is used to a quieter pace, the event becomes a highlight, and Andy's playful imitation on the fence adds a sweet touch.

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Sometimes, life in the villages can be simple, but rewarding. Greetings

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Well written!

This is such a heartwarming story that beautifully captures the simple joys and excitement of a small village awaiting a cycling event. Andy's fascination with bicycles and the community's reaction to the race paints a vivid picture of unity and happiness amidst limitations.

Thank you for sharing your story!

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I think you hit the mark: how with so little, some people, can be happy. Greetings

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