With You...

With everywhere being filled with darkness she is a light
A warrior and more...she does everything with all her might
A lover and a friend...always constant and instant both day and night
This is a good problem to have...someone so true...a welcomed plight
I fixed my gaze on her and she's the only one in my sight
I would break every wall to get to her, even if I have to put up the fight
I don't need validations to tell me whether it's wrong or right
Every obstacle on my way I would bulldoze with delight
Love is never easy, I know but it's never without its fright
Every feeling of wrongs and superiority it has to blight
It has its high and lows...as it brings you low...still takes you to greater height
Hold me by the hands, lover..let me fly with you like the kite
It's a rollercoaster of emotions I know but just trust me and hold me tight
I could take a look into a room full of people and still find you easily
I can take a peek into everyone and you'd still be my favourite person
Your love is real just like you and you thought me a great and valuable lesson
That love isn't just about what everyone says but what you say and who you are
Love is different with everyone - the same but expressed differently
We don't all have the same expression but we speak the same language of love
Love is you...love is me...love is us and together we create a better force


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Thank you for your time.


My pen doesn't bleed, it speaks, with speed and ease.

Still me,

My tongue is like the pen of a ready writer.

Olawalium; (Love's chemical content, in human form). Take a dose today: doctor's order.



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Love is indeed beautiful when you love right and understand the fact that it differs with persons. Some people are just so easy to love and care for and similarly some people are very easy to love people and care for them. We all should just learn to either show love or be at least lovable ❤️.

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Very well said!

I think it is more important to learn how to make people around you feel loved, because that has a boomerang effect on you too. If you make people feel loved, they return the love to you. In a thousand fold😊
Besides there is no harm in putting smiles on people's faces every now and then.

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That's right dear, but then I think we should show love to people regardless because they are humans, they might never seem to love you in return but it shouldn't stop you from loving them. Like you have rightly said, it also has a boomerang effect on us as well 🥰.

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True love should have no class or age barrier. True love is never selective... regardless...love shines through and breaks the barriers.

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I totally agree with you boo, that's what true love is and nothing can change that 🥰

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Love has that ripple effect. When people around us feel loved it's easier for them to seek for ways to make us feel the same. Love is capable of reoccurring and going round with a single act.

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Some people make love easy by the way they don't hold back, they express and they communicate in the language their partner understands.

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Yeah, it is obvious that those kind of partners communicate a lot with each other and they understand what love really is to an extent.

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That's the kind of love that spur each other on and lead each other to greater heights of love and deeper depths of love as well.

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Oh...I love those who don't hold back. They show me how they also want to be love and it makes me even intentional. I keep learning of ways to love people more.

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Love...be loved...share love...spread love...love is the basis of our existence and it feels so good to love someone and have someone love us back. Thank you

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That's exactly all it is to love, thank you so much for always sharing wonderful tips about so many things, it's always nice coming around 🥰.

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Love is filled in here. I can feel the delight. The light is bewitching and my soul scream in greatness all night.

This is beautiful, Mr. Square. Some hugs and !luv to you.

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The delight is contagious. The poetry is riddled with emotions of love and romance. I enjoyed it too and good to see I wasn't alone.

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Hehe... Yes, such delightfulness. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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Hahaha you people are making my head to swell and if care is not taken...my head might grow bigger than it is at this rate haha.

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Your soul screams in delight and appreciation and I am forever grateful for your kind words and you being here. It means a lot. Thank you, Bal.

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You are welcome Mucho Macho😂😂. My original Mr. Square.

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This is a true confession of love and whoever this belongs to should know that the kind of love you are giving his rare.

It is a great thing to have found someone we love and to be loved wholeheartedly, this is beautiful poem.

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You are right, who ever this is written too should know they far beyond been special because this is definitely from the heart

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Straight from the heart and I am glad it's relative and relatable which is why everyone can relate with it in one way or the other and it touched everyone's heart. Thank you.

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What a joy it is to love and to be loved. It's a beautiful feeling and when someone expresses their feelings this way, it should be matched. Withholding nothing back.

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It's a beautiful feeling to have your love replicated. It's a beautiful feeling to know you are not alone.

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It's nice when you find someone worth sharing such a feeling with. It's one of the most amazing feeling in the world which can inspire anyone to greatness. Thank you so much.

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Awww
I hope you wrote this poem for me sha or else I no go gree ooh

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😂😂🤣😂🤣 take out the part you love there and I would make you own it.

Thank you dear.

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As I will always say the word love is greatest thing human ever invented or should I say the greatest human ever spoke and it hold great power even beyond human imagination. What it mean and how it work, is still a mystery.. One day I know I will feel this way again but till then boss I think you should start like a short podcast or is it short poet podcast, you going to grow big within a short time

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That is actually a nice idea @olawalium.

People, especially those appreciate pure talent, will enjoy a podcast from you.
I will definitely your first subscriber😅

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Zita be calming down, okay so me wa bring idea no go be first subscriber abi??? Dey play oooo

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😂😂😂

Maybe you go take 2nd position, But na me go be first😌

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Oh okay, because they always say ladies first abi..... no wahala I give you chance

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Battle of the first hahaha. You both are clowns. Thanks to you both.

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🤣😂🤣🤣😂🤣🤣 fastest fingers first.

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Love is love. Love is deep and encompassing. Some people get burned by it but that's the human factor. I believe love will find you soon.

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Love is indeed love. Some people find love and love find some people but the thing is, love is for everyone even when we feel differently.

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Human didn't invent love. The world and human were created even in love. God is love...love is God. Love is such a beautiful thing that no one can ever deny no matter how it is conceived.

I have a podcast but it has been so long I posted on it. It's about relationship too. You can have a listen: https://anchor.fm/olawale-olawalium

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Hi,

Your words perfectly express the complexity and essence of love. I enjoy the way you describe your admiration and feelings for this unique person. It serves as a reminder that love knows no borders and no divisions. The notion that love speaks the same language yet expresses itself in various ways is also very moving. It was a pleasure to read from you. I look forward to reading more of your work!😊

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You have good eyes for details and I love that part too. It's expressed in different ways yet love stays the same.

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Hahaha the funny thing is that line just came to me when I got immersed in the poem as I was scribbling it down. I'm glad it is well appreciated. Thank you.

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It's a pleasure to read from you especially your appreciation of this poem. It's deeply appreciated and I am grateful. Thanks for that and I am more than happy to have you here.

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We don't all have the same expression but we speak the same language of love
Love is you...love is me...love is us and together we create a better force

I keep these last two lines friend, because it is true, we all see love in different ways but in the end it is the same feeling, what a complete blessing is to find a person like that, that is with you in good times and bad, that more than a partner is a life partner, we all look for something nice, something sincere and above all something real in someone, very nice writing friend, hug ♥

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We see love differently and feel it differently. We love in the way we understand best. Love is for the open hearted. Love is beautiful.

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We see love differently and feel it differently. We love in the way we understand best. Love is for the open hearted. Love is beautiful.

You are right, love is the most beautiful thing on the face of the earth in that we have no doubt because love moves the fibers of people, we do many things that we ourselves do not even imagine, everything is completely beautiful ♥

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Someone once said that love is such a beautiful things that no one can ever deny no matter how it is conceived and it's right.

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Someone once said that love is such a beautiful things that no one can ever deny no matter how it is conceived and it's right.

It is so, because love is something difficult to explain with words, only the facts and demonstrations of affection are the most sincere no matter how much you hide your feelings to someone, sooner or later they come out, I don't know who said that but he is absolutely right ☺

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Our understanding of love explains how we love and how we express our love. I am glad you feel the same way and I appreciate this. Thanks a lot.

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It's a blessing to find someone like that in the good and bad times. They make bad moments easier to bear because life sometimes happen. I am glad you enjoyed this, my friend. I always appreciate your appreciation for my works. It means a lot. God bless you even more.

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It's a blessing to find someone like that in the good and bad times. They make bad moments easier to bear because life sometimes happen. I am glad you enjoyed this, my friend. I always appreciate your appreciation for my works. It means a lot. God bless you even more.

The weariness of life on your back weighs heavy, but with the right person, the burden gets much lighter and it's a mutual thing, that feeling is amazing, it's like the bible says, when you find a partner, you automatically become one, I double all the blessings you wish me ♥

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The soul mate talks and his counterpart listens.
The soulmate suffers and his counterpart comforts.
Love is a give and take of concentric emotions.
A beautiful poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Good day.

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You absolutely nailed it. Love is about give and take. There is no one size fits all. It's about reciprocating that love and making everyone feel alive again.

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Thanks for the recognition, I'm glad you liked my humble contribution.
Happy weekend.

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You, quite creatively, highlighted some invaluable qualities of true love... and we the readers love to see it😊.

I would break every wall to get to her, even if I have to put up the fight.
I don't need validations to tell me whether it's wrong or right.

This talks about trust. It is only with immense trust in each other, that you can be secure enough to not seek external validation. With mutual trust comes satisfaction and peace.

It has its high and lows...as it brings you low...still takes you to greater height

This demonstrates commitment. For truly, love does come with high highs and even lower lows, and it is in this time that the spirit of commitment drives you to persevere and hold on. When you remember that you and your partner have chosen to remain committed to each other, you look for ways to make it work!

I could take a look into a room full of people and still find you easily
I can take a peek into everyone and you'd still be my favourite person.

This illustrates the sense of belonging that accompanies true love. How loved and at home you feel when you look at the person you love. It is truly a remarkable feeling.
Knowing that no matter what happens to you when you step out into the world, you always have that special someone by your side rooting for you and cheering you on.

Once again, you have left me speechless and amazed.
Well done🌹

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Wow... Never knew you were so good with word analysis or is love poet your niche?

Was an impressive one... I missed out some of the deep meanings of the wordings actually but you brought me back to reality.

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😅😅 Awwnn thank you.
Poems aren't really my niche, I'm just appreciating his pure talent.

I missed out some of the deep meanings of the wordings actually but you brought me back to reality.

Well, I'm glad I got you too see it from my POV.
Thanks for the comment🥂

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Thank you and I am glad you gave your honest comment. Indeed what comes from the heart touches the heart.

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You would be surprised what love can bring out of people. Love when felt and understood can get anyone thinking and acting. Hahaha.

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I have to agree with you. Every line is with an intent to please and pass the right message across. Love must be felt deeply to be understood deeply too. It's a beautiful poetry.

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I said something similar to this. That's absolutely spot on. What comes from the heart touches the heart. Thank you.

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I love how detailed you are about your comment which shows deep understanding of the poem and appreciation too. I am happy to have you here. Thank you.

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Love is always a scam as most persons say until you get to meet that very person who is just so so your match and will unlock all in you

even if I have to put up the fight

That's to tell you the extent love is willing to take you on a ride especially with that special one.

Hold me by the hands, lover..let me fly with you like the kite

I really can't laugh less😂😂😂😂😂... You've killed me abeg 😂😂😂
I'm just trying to picture how good this would really be if it was possible.

That's why your post is always different.
It just picks me up takes me above the clouds and drops me when I see, my pen doesn't bleed
Such a fascinating poet you are🙇

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Love is always a scam as most persons say until you get to meet that very person who is just so so your march and will unlock all in you

This is very true. Even the hardest guys will still fall madly in love when they meet their person😅

It just picks me up takes me above the clouds and drops me when I see, my own doesn't bleed

Awwnn, It really does transport people to a different realm when reading it.
It's why you have to compose yourself before reading his work. If not, the poem can carry you go where you no know😅.

Nice perspective🌹

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😂😂😂😂😂
Honestly oh my dear
I'm always armed before reading his poem

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Hahaha always on guard. No shaking.

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Before the breeze will take me to where the pen might finally bleed 😂😂

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Love is a transporter o hahaha without fare sef. You go just find yourself where you no know...dem go carry you go where you no wan go 🤣😂🤣

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Love they say is a crime that requires an accomplice hahaha. Love is capable of making you do what you never imagined you can ever do. Love can make one mumu finish 😂🤣😂🤣

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D mumu no dy small oh

But then with the right person, it all worths it honestly 👍

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Love is beautiful and can't be quantified. I love how you expressed your feelings without holding back. It's a lesson to learn and we are expected to feel so we can allow ourselves to be expressive where love is concerned. I love love.

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Someone once said that "I love love...I love being in love and I don't care what it does to me." Love is indeed beautiful and powerful. A great force that is capable of making us do what we never thought we could.

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Love is you...love is me...love is us and together we create a better force
Sincerely i enjoyed taking this dose of ya love chemical content, in human form. The conclusion makes it clear that togther we can oppose motion and obtain success

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👏 thank you, brother. I am grateful and good to have you here.

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Nice way to give value of our love one, woman gives a lot of raisons to be alive.

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