RE: Obim- Genesis of The Beautiful Goddess.
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Beautiful story @mrenglish but there were lots of errors in it. You should proofread your stories before posting them, that way, a masterpiece story like this will be just that, a masterpiece.
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Thank you for calling my attention to the errors. I had to go all over it again to see what you meant. I have had them corrected.
I appreciate your constructive critique.
Thanks again @prayzz