Ember
I remember that I used to try. Used to care
about damn goals and getting there,
used to struggle, fight, and battle,
risk it all, thinking that will
justify the air I breathe, steam released,
if dreams achieved
could cradle embers, blow them hot
fan them high and burn the lot
of doubts that mouldered way down deep
where it stinks and dark flows seep
through every crack in confidence
every pause and hesitance.
Then I stopped, I dropped. I rolled
away those goals, those dreams were sold.
I kicked them, bashed them, drowned them good,
pretended it was perfect where I stood.
Let the ember shrink down low
Let my passion die of cold.
But while I turned and walked away
you crept in quietly, and finally saved
the last few sparks of heart in me
fanned them gently, lovingly
kept that flame alive and glowing.
Right til this day, it still is growing.
(Image adapted from Helly Maist/Pexels)
Very powerful. I've been there. The flame image being consistently used in different ways throughout is excellent.
Thanks so much for your encouraging feedback!!
Very nice poem. I love the imagery and the picture you put up too. It says that you had passion and then you lost it. It doesn't say how or why it was lost tho. Just an observation.
Really nice poem in all.
Thank you so much, an a very helpful observation about what was not included in the poem.
Be well!
You're welcome. Glad to be of help. And that doesn't mean it compulsorily has to be included. I just wanted to get the angle you were coming from. Be well too. Ciao
Very good poem, we need that spark that motivates us to continue and move forward to achieve our goals and objectives, great poem thanks for sharing it.
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This poem really showed both the pain of losing your passion and the joy of rediscovering it with help from someone who loves you 👍☮️👍
Thank you for your kind reading of my poem!!!
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Thanks for the pizza lol 🍕!
My pleasure!! :)