Poem: Touring your paradise (Recorriendo tu paraiso) [EN/ES]
Touring your paradise
I would become Dante,
to discover your valley,
where passions burn
and illusions are armed.
To run through its gentle waters
like a river along its path,
exact as bow and spear,
to travel without whereabouts.
I want to burn in your circles
that each one makes his footprints,
building our bonds,
and become nights of stars.
Español
Recorriendo tu paraiso
Me convertiría en Dante,
para descubrir tu valle,
donde se queman pasiones
y se arman las ilusiones.
Recorrer sus aguas mansas
cual río por su sendero,
exacto cual arco y lanza,
recorrer sin paradero.
Quiero, arder en tus círculos
que cada uno haga sus huellas,
construyendo nuestros vínculos,
y se hagan noches de estrellas.
Text authored by:
Yenny Aldazora
DRA
¡Thanks for you reading!
@rinconpoetico7
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This is great and it sounds like an adventure!
I was so intrigued that I shared my random thoughts on LeoThreads and invited you there too :) Hope you check it out and let's have some fun conversation. Thank you and see you 😉
Excellent poem that works well in both Spanish and English. It has a similar rhythm in both languages, though the Spanish one is more passionate
Muy caliente!
Muy lindo poema, me encanto mucho ese juego de rimas que utilizaste para esta obra de mucho romance y amor, muy hermoso, gracias por compartir ♥