Kneel, Haiku
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night is getting late
insects are getting tighter
curled up in the cold
I take ablution
kneel down in the silent night
essence as servant
Pick me up my Lord
In the name of Your blessing
Get Your paradise
Find true life of Yours
servants and masters have merged
Enjoy happiness
This post need suggest from all reader. I just try to make this haiku.
Thank you for reading my post. I hope you enjoy it.
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Ah, I really like the first one! You are meeting the form, the natural world idea behind haiku and it produces a wonderful image - a universal truth. It is quite hard to produce more than one at a time, isn't it?
Thank you so much.
often poetry is not a mass product. it is a form of expression of the heart that needs the inner atmosphere and soul that observes the universe.
he cannot be repeated simply out of praise. it will flow like dew drops that can only be seen in the morning and then disappear in the afternoon. Thank you for flattery. hopefully there will be another mood that gives birth to a string of words.
I agree with you. I think it would be better to wait until you had four haikus with the quality of the first one, rather than diminish the beauty of the first one with later poems that are not up to the same standard.
This may mean that you post only once or twice a week but you would achieve much more.
This is awesome... I always find it hard to create haiku because of the limitation... I usually write freely, so this amazes me... 🥰
Thank you so much.