PAIN !!!
How do I escape this excruciating pain,
This high-wrenching feeling I get,
Anytime I think of you,
All because you rocked my world.
We were very much in love,
We were inseparable,
But, within a twinkle of an eye,
You were gone.
I could no longer behold your voice,
The laughter ceased from your face,
Your eyes once filled with the light turned dark,
You are a mile faded away.
My heart aches all alone,
My heart bleeds profusely,
My heart breaks and can't be fixed,
My heart is turned from the inside out because my world is lost.
I try to wear a smile but it's empty,
I try to speak but my voice is hollow,
How do I let go? I asked the empty air,
For I have none to help and so I say, "God, please help me".
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Oh the pain of losing the love of our lives is such an excruciating pain, I hope you heal soon.
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This is deep! I understand the overwhelming pain of loss and heartbreak. You convey it well in this poem with such vivid imagery like "My heart aches...". Stay strong and keep your faith. Beautifully written! !LADY
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Thank you for your kind words 🙏🙏🙏🙏
Hello @rukkie , I am of the opinion that you hit the bull's eye, since you achieved the objective of transmitting in some way what we feel when someone undertakes a physical or emotional departure, I loved reading you, so I took the trouble to analyze your poem in order to give you my point of view and perspective of what I understood after reading this poem:
This poem is a poignant expression of the pain and sadness that arises from the loss of a loved one. The poem focuses on the speaker's desperation to escape the pain he feels after his world was rocked by the sudden departure of his loved one.
The way the speaker describes his grief is intense and visceral, using images such as “my heart bleeds profusely" and “my heart is broken and cannot be mended.” There is also a sense of abandonment and loneliness, which is especially felt in the line “Because I have no one to help me.”
Overall, the poem is a clear and emotional depiction of the pain that comes with the loss of someone close to you. The author has managed to effectively convey these universal and common emotions that many of us have experienced at some point in our lives.
Excellent poetic work, thank you for sharing quality and original poetry.
I am happy to see your response to this and more glad you analyzed the poem.
The emotion behind this was real. It is hard and the feeling of loneliness that takes place after the loss of loved ones.
I appreciate you genuinely for understanding what has been written, it shows you understand the impact of poetry is humans life. Though the words said are always short but the deep meaning behind them are superb. It goes a long way.
Thank you again. Have a good day.
Very touching poem, sometimes losses like this hurt but as I have already gone through some moments like this, I just tell you that one recovers, sooner or later but that you recover you recover, everything will be fine, thank you for this piece ♥ hug
Nicely done! Excellent piece on love and loss.. which is quite painful at times.. I can feel your words hit home for me.
It indeed hurts when someone you've given your all to suddenly dash your hope to the wall.
And just like you concluded, only God can help
Yes it hurts indeed.
Thank you for reading
Always welcome
Nice way to express such bitter feelings. Greetings