Theinkwell writing challenge | What Mara saw outside the window.

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It's a strange thing! Carlos repeated every day when he saw Mara at the window, his intrigue was so great that he always saw her every day from his door, Mara his neighbor, every morning he woke up, had a cup of hot coffee and looked out his window two or three hours.

Two years passed and Mara repeated the same story, she had always been a very sociable woman until her parents died in a tragic car accident in December 2008.

On 11-15-2020 Carlos woke up and got dressed to go to his place of work, I miss him not seeing Mara at the window, after eight hours of work he returned home and turned again to see if he could see his neighbor Mara , could not.

The night passed and the next morning Carlos got up earlier with the intention of going to Mara's house to verify that nothing bad was happening since Mara was a single woman, she had no children, an only daughter, and her parents had died.

Carlos looked at the window and did not see it, he went to his house and knocked on the door but no one answered, he looked out the same window and managed to see Mara's body on the floor, he quickly called 911 to notify and an ambulance arrived. the ten minutes.

A great movement was generated and many neighbors gathered outside their house to know what was happening with Mara since she was a woman with a good heart loved by all, they managed to enter the house forcing the door, the paramedic shouted: “She is alive, she is alive ”and transferred to the hospital.

Carlos stayed at the house shocked and saddened by the condition in which Mara left her house, almost dead, a great curiosity invaded her body and she looked out the window where she saw Mara every day, I managed to see a great photograph of her parents with a writing that said: "Soon I will be with you, I miss you" and saw on the table a notebook and a pencil that he took and read.

Mara expressed there her enormous sadness and how lonely she felt, her deep desire to reconnect with her parents and no longer live the torment of loneliness, a paragraph broke Carlos's heart that said: “I can't bear to continue more without you by my side, every day I see outside the window begging God to take me, I don't want to live anymore ”; He cried and left for the hospital.

It took Carlos only fifteen minutes to get to the hospital where when he asked about Mara they informed him that she had just died, a sudden heart attack took her life, she cried bitterly but at the same time felt calm knowing that her desire to be with her parents was already over. had fulfilled.

Carlos was a Writer by profession. After his experience, he decided to write a book that he called: “What Mara saw outside the window”.


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Excelente relato y muy triste, pero así suele pasar en la vida con algunas personas, cada quien sabe lo que lleva adentro del alma.

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Hay un dicho muy común: "Solo conoce las goteras de la casa el que vive allí dentro" Siempre el ser humano externo juzgara según su óptica, existen seres humanos con muchas aptitudes y destrezas pero su actitud no les permite continuar adelante ya sea por depresión o cualquier otro motivo que les hace encerrarse y llegar a anhelar la muerte, aun mas sin familia, suele pasar... sentirse solo es muy desagradable. "MORIR SERIA GLORIOSO".

Gracias por pasar y leer, es realmente agradable leerte.

EXITOSO DÍA.

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