A Tale of Two Pizzas: Of discord and danger...

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Henry stood leaning against the old Oak, arms crossed, narrow eyes staring intensely at Delilah's small form seated on the rock besides Jet. He deliberated.

She could feel his scrutiny and it made her feel uncomfortable. She knew she had been a little reckless in her fervent desire to be of help to the Pizza Baron, but she didn't need a lecture from a stable hand.

"What were you thinking, Delilah?" he demanded to know.

Her eyes blazing, she turned to face him once more. "You're not my father, Henry! We're the same age for heaven's sakes!"

Henry sighed. Delilah was headstrong. It was one of the things he loved about her. She knew her own mind. But she was stubborn, as stubborn as that cat of hers, and once her mind was made up...He shook his head. She was passionate no doubt, but if only she would think things through. He kicked at the dirt in front of him, and then as if in a change of heart and tack, his eyes softened, and with it, his voice.

"It's not safe to be out here at night, 'Lilah-bee."

He hadn't called her that in years, and hearing those words now, brought her an odd sense of comfort and relief. Delilah looked up to meet his gaze. He was her best friend, had been since the day he had helped her rescue the little kitten from the dam behind the stables, and later taken the blame for both of them getting soaked in the process after falling in. That kitten was her gorgeous Mirabel. From her last count, Mirabel had 7 lives left!

The story goes that Henry had wandered into their family estate as a toddler. Nobody knew where he had come from or how he had got there, but after months of fruitless searching, her father had asked one of the nannies to raise him as their own. As a result, they had grown up together behind the four walls of the Fruit Baron's Estate. She knew him so well and frustratingly she knew the converse to be true.

They were tutored together during the mornings and had spent most afternoons in each other's company, exploring the local countryside, swimming in the rivers, climbing up waterfalls, riding horses, and so it had terrified her the first time she had looked at him on a late afternoon visit to the nearby natural springwater pools and, instead of seeing Henry, her playmate, jostling with her in the water, in his place had seen a young man, with broadening shoulders, a mop of dark hair, suntanned bare-chested skin and a cheeky grin that lit up the approaching evening. And now, in much of his spare time, he worked for her father in the stables, learning a trade.

"Delilah, are you ok?"

"Uh, yeah, I guess. It's just, you scared me, Henry. I wasn't expecting to see you here. I thought you were...I thought you were..."

"One of ... them?" Henry finished the sentence for her, whilst gesturing up towards the gatehouse towers.

"Yes." She knew he wasn't going to like what she had to say next.

Henry looked at her. She wasn't a little girl anymore. She was becoming a young woman; a beautiful one at that. He gulped and looked away quickly, feeling the warming glow rising in his cheeks and hoping she hadn't noticed. He wasn't quite sure what to do next as regards their predicament. Delilah had cut back on her path so many times, and traversed so many river crossings that he felt lucky just to have kept up and retained her in his sights through it all. He had been so intent on making sure he didn't lose her, that he had lost track of where they were some miles back.

"Henry..." Delilah broke the awkward silence between them, "I need to go back up there and find out what is going on."

"I don't think that's a very good idea, Lilah. We don't know who those men are, and if the cars are anything to go by, then there are quite a few of them. It's unlikely that they are meeting for something as innocent as a game of cards. Those guards look like they mean business."

But Delilah wouldn't listen and before Henry had a chance to do anything about it, she was in the saddle and pushing uphill through the copse headed up to the wall to the right of the gate towers. He had no option but to mount up himself and give chase. God, she was one stubborn woman, he thought. But a beautifully stubborn one, he smiled, somewhat annoyed at his ambivalent feelings.

He caught up with her just as she was dismounting alongside the length of the enclosure wall. They walked in silence alongside each other for a couple of minutes as they rounded the estate's perimeter.

They heard it at the same time. The voices were coming from just ahead of them, filtering through an open window from which also glowed a pale light. They let the horses loose whilst they crept up to the open window and crouched below the ledge.

The voices were audible but slightly muffled. Delilah and Henry could make out bits and pieces of the conversation. One person seemed to be leading the discussion ... A coup was being talked about... and the man clearly had a cohort of supporters in the room. His words were met with cheers and loud clapping and banging of glasses. The Pizza Baron's time had come... The people would see the light ...eventually. But there was no time...They had to take action now... This was the general message that they gleaned.

Delilah couldn't resist. She turned and slowly but surely rose to peer over the window ledge into the room. Barons! Lots of them! And at the head of the table.... her father.

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This is my entry for A Tale of Two Pizzas by @dibblers.dabs



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OOOOOOOOOOOO! Love the twist! Well done and another great entry this week!
!PIZZA
!ALIVE

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Thanks @dibblers.dabs. You'll never believe it, but this was almost a freewrite lol. I mean I did go and finesse it up afters but I was running out of time super fast. I knew where I wanted to take this part of the story and wanted my version to be in with a shot this week so I had to just get stuck in and write lols. !PIZZA

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It turned out beautifully! I try to write mine somewhat like that too- I get the whole thing out and then spend about 10 minutes going back over it- break it into paragraphs and edit it a smidgeon.

I had a feeling you were going somewhere like this with it! My original intention with Delilah being lost was for her to bump into Barry and Rachel as they escaped the Preda's- but the beauty of this contest is that it's not up to me! I appreciate what you've brought to the story and I'm glad you got the entry done in time!
!PIZZA
!LUV

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Aw thank you @dibblers.dabs. That would have been a great way to go too! !PIZZA I have a feeling that the characters are all going to start to overlap into each of the sideline plots and stories very soon though. They can't all keep developing separately; story threads must start to come together as we move towards a conclusion.

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I absolutely agree! It will be interesting to see how and where they begin to come together! So many variable styles involved in the writing- who knows what might happen! !PIZZA

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Exactly, and just as you try to take things in one direction and we surprise you by going in the opposite, we have no control over where you take us in between each week, so we wait with bated breath for you to determine what happens next with each thread of the story and whether your next step brings any of the characters back together or in contact for the first time, or whether it will be one or more of us doing so either with competing or congruent story lines.

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I've actually been mulling over how we can improve the process for when(if?) we reach a conclusion. I don't want to stop the creative flow we have developed here and will want to start another series that follows a similar pattern. Perhaps with everyone that enters casting a vote for the entries that become canon each week.
That way it will be more a community effort and not so much guided by me!
First we must reach the end of this adventure though before diverting too much to the next!
!PIZZA

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PIZZA! PIZZA! PIZZA! PIZZA! PIZZA! PIZZA! PIZZA! PIZZA! PIZZA! PIZZA! PIZZA! PIZZA! PIZZA! PIZZA! PIZZA! PIZZA! PIZZA!
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ooooooooo the plot thickens hehehe

I said that I was going to join in the fun - but honestly??? i am having too much fun watching you guys spin this out! hahahaha

and a few times I thought wait... who was this again? who was that? hahahahaha

so MAYBE I will join in once I start to get the groove... but until then, I'm really enjoying this hehehe

and "Lilah-bee" oh my gosh... heheheh that just made me swoon. what a sweet name and what a sweet moment between the two of them! hehehehe

maybe they need their own spin-off tale hahahahahahaah

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Then there's your answer: do their spin-off :)

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shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... LOLOLOL

you know there is still A MUCH LARGER ending for me to concern myself with... and YES. i've actually begun working on in this week.

but I shouldn't have told you that hahahahahahahaha don't worry - i promise - YOU will be the first I send it to! hehehe

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Now THAT is exciting news 🙌

Sometimes it's better to just start writing, then the story sort of comes out on its own!

!PIZZA !ALIVE

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yes - I've done that before with so many things!!! it just comes pouring out of me!

but not with Fireflies - hahahaha they are just really playing hide and seek with me hahahahaha

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lol then try to look at it from a fresh perspective???

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i'm gonna try to go back and re-read from the beginning and see what happens
if that doesn't work hahahahaha
i'll try your idea LOL

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lol I hope something works 🤣 I'm still debating whether or not to do an edited version of the Goddess series, maybe one post every week or two.

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You always deliver ... no matter what you do ... whatever it is ... I look forward to hearing about it when the time comes💗

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hehehehe Fireflies is a trilogy I ALMOST finished writing. hahaha Oldschool (@wrestlingdesires) is probably my #1 fan - after my daughter of course hahahaha

She ferociously guards that title - BUT Oldschool has DEFINITELY asked for the 3rd book much more than she has hahahahahahaha

so - i don'tknow - it might be a tie LOL

he's been so super patient. His anticipation of the final piece makes me want to finish - just for him! hahahaha let alone just FINISHING the trilogy! LOLOLOL

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Aaah ... I have often wondered where "Like Talia, I often have fireflies in my eyes" came from, and have been meaning to ask 😍@wrestlingdesires is certainly one of the most supportive and motivational people on this platform. I am so grateful that he came across one of my posts a few months ago and had the generosity of heart and spirit to tag my post and thereby bring me into contact with both you and Wil. You three are my own trilogy of blessings 💗 My other trilogy of blessings is Calum, Felix, and Nonso who challenge me to do better week in and week out in my writing in WOTW ... I know Calumam is still there in spirit :-)... and now I have dibblersdabs who has given me the opportunity to collaborate in a new form and style of writing that pushes my boundaries yet again. What can I say...made up! Blessed! I hope Fireflies is everything you want it to be and more. I'm sure your connection with your characters is a close and solid one ... seems like even they were starting to get restless with the wait lols ... but I'm glad they had the courage to tell you😂😍

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yeah... Fireflies is beautiful to me - right now. hehehe
but its not finished.
but i wish it was! hahahahahaha because it's SO perfect to me. but its really not finished yet. I know that.

I think i know a war is coming. hahah (and they do too) and we aren't all sure how its supposed to end. and we're anxious LOL

so maybe we're just all avoiding it ?!?!?!?! LOLOLOLOLOL

but i've committed to going back and re-reading the first and second book (and first half of third) and see if it feels differently to kinda let it swell hehehehe

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Are the first two books available then? On Hive? Kindle? Somewhere else that I can find them, lol? ...or are they going to be released as a trilogy straight off? I think that it is a big part of the joy of creative writing ... we experience the journey for the first time with our characters and we allow them to take their time making big decisions because we want them to be perfect for both them and the story. We also become deeply invested with how things will look for them once we release them to continue their stories and journey beyond the confines of the final pages caught between hardcover, and beyond all the 'storytelling' and showing that we can do as writers...

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the first one was on amazon - but i just took it off a few months ago because i didn't like the way the publisher put it on. it wasn't like a "real" publisher - hahaha i'm not that "big time" LOL

but once i get the whole thing done - i was thinking about maybe getting an agent - just to see!

and you don't have to look for it - I'll just send it to you! hahaha

but as I go back this week,(and next probably) I'm going to be editing some more to be SURE its the way I want it. It's 99.9% the way I want it - but sometimes you miss things.

so i'll send it off to you when that's done :) i'll love you to read it!!!!

and yes - to all that you're saying about the process. When I wrote the first book - I thought it was just going to be one book. And the ending of that was so emotional for me .

I had released it on Steemit - one post at a time, and I had all these people who were enjoying it and supporting it - and the comment section of every post became ALIVE with like- what will happen? who is really doing what? who's bad? who's good? and it actually got a little heated for a bit as two clear teams developed hahahahaha

but talk about FUN!!!!!

i mean - that's all i love - the interaction with the reader. it fuels me. i love love love it.

and I SO respect my readers. For me - it was so important that they felt that I had honored their time. I cannot stand when authors will just suck you in, to drop you at the end with the laziest endings.. it is SO disrespectful!!!!

So I try very much to honor them. so yeah - hehehe that ending was hard.... and so now that I've continued you - you can imagine how much I want to honor their time after spending 3 books with me! hahahahahahahahahaha

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Thank you, it will be my humble privilege to read it🙏A friend of mine is a published author in print and digital. He seems to have found a good agent. He writes both non-fiction and fiction. When the time is right, if you would like me to ask him for the details of his agent, I will happily do so for you. His name is Matt Jardine and you can find him on Amazon with his autobiographical pilgrimage style book "The Hardest Path" and another non-fiction "How to be a Buddhist Millionaire". He also has some fiction novels pending publication.

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i definitely would love that! :) that's exciting!! i love having connections like that, it's less awkward them starting the search cold!!!!

thank you so much!!! :) and i will check him out on amazon too hehehehe

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Yes! This! !PIZZA ... c'mon @dreemsteem, the gauntlet has been laid down😂😍

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LOLOL no no no. hahaha i'll leave the spin-off to you! hehehe you're the one they're whispering to! hehehe

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!PIZZA to that...a spin-off lols ... we can't even get this story finished yet ha ha ... I have to admit, their affection for each other kinda wrote itself. I had no idea they harboured these feelings until they showed me! I literally just allowed the characters to take me where they wanted to go ... I knew I wanted her father to be the head of the gathering of Barons but the rest ... well that caught me off guard too 😂💗😂 will be watching for that sneaky entry of yours one day Dreems. I know we'll !LUV it when it comes.

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that is EXACTLY how I usually write Samantha!!!!!!

so often I will surprise myself as I write - I'm reading along with the reader!!!! hahahaha and I'm like - you don't say!!! wow.... really??? (listening to the characters whisper their intentions into my ear)

sincerely. it happens every time. lol

For now, I've been desperately trying to finish a trilogy that i'm 2.5 books into. and i absolutely love this story - LOVE it. its been something i'm so proud of! but..... halfway into book 3 - they just decided to wait on me.
hahahahahahaha
but I've just decided to immerse myself FULLY back into their world and take days in the week where I do nothing but listen for them, and walk alongside them, and scribble down what I see hehehehehe

so MAYBE i might jump into the pizza story - i dont' know.. hehehe i'm really so enjoying watching it unfold by all you writers - you're working so well together! it almost feels like i'm entering a secret club and i need to learn the handshake first hahahahaha know what i mean?

and that's not any air that you guys are giving off!!! you all are being extremely welcoming! but for me - i'm like - just watching and enjoying and wondering hehehehe

we will see ;) i might sneak in hahahahahaha

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Fantastic. I am excited for you and your trilogy 'baby' and I look forward to its birth one day💗And I completely get you about that secret club feeling! I kinda thought that the first time I took part but then I quickly realised that it only feels that way from the outside because those on the inside are all enjoying the process so much, everybody is generous of their support and love for each others writing and storylines and I happen to think that we all write well together too 💗 We genuinely enjoy each other's works and spark off each other's creativity each week. If you get a chance once your characters have finished telling you their story, please feel free to jump in. You know you will be welcomed with open arms and you will feel as if you have been part of the club from day 1! 😍

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hehehehe thank you for the encouragement - i'm definitely on the side of the pool with my bathing suit on, and creeping nearer to the edge! hahahahahahahaha

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!LUV this Dreems. It is such an amazing process, isn't it? When we surrender to our characters and listen to their story. There's definitely something higher level going on😍You have to wonder where the whispers are coming from...

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hahahahaha believe me - there are times when I wake up and read what I've written and I look around the room and wait for someone else to jump out of the closet and claim to have done it.

cuz i'm like - WHEN DID I WRITE THIS?!?!! LOLOLOLOLOL

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@samsmith1971 jumped right in and made her own groove Lilah-bee was a brand new character! So I'm certain you will be able to do the same when you are ready! I'm very glad you've been enjoying reading it each week- it's beginning to develop legs of its own!
!PIZZA

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I can't take all the credit lol. One of the other writers created her in passing as a 'walk on' early on in the story, but I decided to name her and give her a story lols

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That one moment has grown into a whole story arc. Delilah is shaping up to be a major factor in all of this! <3

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I may have given her wings, but she does not belong to me. Whilst I will probably continue to write a story for her,we are all capable of directing her flight path :-)

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yeah at one point i missed... WAIT.

now i see why maybe.

i know i followed you - and it says i didn't ( i swear Hive is playing tricks.. I've found 3 others that i had to follow AGAIN this week) i saw some weird stuff happenign in notifications - so.... maybe that's why?

but i missed one of your posts and then the story continued and i was so lost - hahahaha
i'm thinking huh??? what happened - i read them all! what did i miss.

ok let me follow you right now - so thati dont' miss anything again heheheeh

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I've noticed similar strange things happen occasionally when I follow someone. Or I'll get a notification that someone followed then immediately unfollowed me three times in a row. Not exactly sure how it happens!
Thanks for the follow! The next section will be going up this evening- I'm working on it now. I am also going to make an "archive post" so that I don't take up the whole screen with links every week before we get to the actual story!
!PIZZA

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i wish we had one massive post with all the actual TEXT in the stories hehehee
so we didn't have to click on links or think - hmmm is this out of order... is this right...

just keep reading the one long post LOL

ok - feel free to tag me in the comment section when your post for today goes up! hehehe so i won't miss it forsure :)

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The intention is for a final post once the tale is complete with all of the text in one place. I guess I could start it now- but I wanted to be able to set all the winning authors as beneficiaries and I wouldn't be able to do that if I published it now and just went back to update it! Never fear though there will be a place to read it all in order once complete! !PIZZA

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Wow... I wonder who she will be loyal to?!?! Things just got a lot harder for Delilah.

Excellent writing :)

!PIZZA !ALIVE

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Thank you, my friend. I guess loyalty comes at a price, and ultimately it may depend on where true integrity lies and where true lies are integral ... and whether or not Delilah's 14-year-old brain and heart can differentiate between the two.

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It would be a difficult position for her at any age! Probably close to impossible for a child!

!LUV

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...And so who can blame her if, by some tragedy, she makes the wrong choice ...

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What is the wrong choice??? Either way she betrays someone she loves.

!PIZZA !ALIVE

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True! This makes it a difficult choice, even once we unravel the truth behind the motives and intentions of the various stakeholders at play.

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Poor Delilah! She really stumbled into a painful sort of puzzle.

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