A Dark Night πŸŒ‰

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A moon so bright..
In such a dark night...
Gives off a pale white light...
Leaving an eerily beautiful sight.

A night so dark
The difference from the day is stark.
In the day, one would have marked
Or at least been able to notice the vehicle parked ..

A means for escape, parked not that far.
It was hidden well, invisible, was painted as black as tar.
Yet the girl, adrenaline heightened, saw the car.
Anger, recklessness and revenge being her driving force.

She moved silently, using the cover of the dark to her advantage.
She picked up a gun, dropped by one of her captives and fired.
The advantageous position was given away, yet no need to panic, no need to fret.

For in that dark night, with a glowing moon.
The once preyed on girl looked at her handwork, with a beating heart, and a shortening breath.
For the driver had escaped, although he left the car behind.
He ran instead, an escape so quick, to the waiting arms of death.



To be honest, I'm not a poet, yet I don't know what to call thisnif it isn't poetryπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
A few ramblings perhaps?
I just took the picture of the moon and got inspired to write this short, a bit vague story....

Please tell me what you think in the comments >⁠.⁠<

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I doubt you would be surprised if I told you that a few of the poems I have ever written were prompted by random pictures I took.

This was beautiful and your rhymes were >>>>>πŸ˜„

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Thanks Shakespeare πŸ˜ƒπŸ”₯

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It was fun story in a poem form - I could visualize the story as you were writing it. I am not good at poetry to give you any advice but it read with a cadence and made sense so I would say it is a pass from me :)
I have been seeing a lot of moon photos recently thanks to @thekittygirl and if this moon pic is recent that dot above it might be Jupiter :)

Thanks for the fun post, though I do feel like I want to know how the driver met his end :D

Cheers from a fellow #dreemerforlife

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Jupiter huhπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
It looked like a regular star to meπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

The moon picture is recent, actually the same day with poem, which was yesterday πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Tbh, I'm not that fluent with poems too...

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Pictures have the power to inspire people to write, and it does to me too.
I can't count the number of write up I have that were inspired by the pictures I took.
The night is always evil and it's risky to move around during then.

#dreemerforlife

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Very nice writing and a great photo, I had fun reading it, usually when we see a photo, it flows a lot of inspiration to write, thanks for sharing this writing β™₯

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what a wonderful poem!

OF COURSE it's poetry.
You image, inspired your words.

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