An unlikely hero - the ink well challenge #47

20220106_230924_0000.pngThere was a boy in a strange land,his father was a zoolinguist while his mom was a veterinarian,his parents died in the previous war and he only survived with the help of his parents. The boy was captured by the foreign soldiers and sold to a strange land where he found himself.
He has been enslaved and maltreated by the slave traders before he got to the strange land where they worship a mighty dragon,the dragon is their god and they always offer human sacrifices to it, mostly the slaves.
The boy was gentle and meek,he would never disobey anyone no matter how much maltreatment he has been through.
The king of the strange land always go around to check on the new slaves,so it was only the boy that paid homage to the king despite of what he has been through,the king wanted to test the boys anger,so they starve him and gave him the hardest works and punishment no one has ever received,but the boy will always remember what his parents always say to him"obedience is better than sacrifices and always believe in God for he will surely be with you".
One festive season,the king ordered the guards to take some slaves to be made as sacrifices to the dragon.
The boy was picked along side with some other slaves.when they got to the entrance of the dragon abode.
The dragon saw the face of the boys father in the boy. The dragon has been treated by the boys father when it was little.
Immediately the dragon roared and destroyed everywhere with fire and it flew to the kings palace and was about to set the whole country on fire but the boy called it by it name and calmed it down.
The king said to himself and his chiefs that lo and behold they have been save by an unlikely hero.
And the boy got married to the beautiful princess.
Thanks for reading.
Have a wonderful day
Lead image edited by me using can



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This is a wonderful story.. truly the boy was an unlikely hero who saved the kingdom.

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Thank you for sharing your imaginative story, @strangeverest. Before we curate your story, please provide the original source link for the image. While you may have edited it in Canva, it's still required to provide the source for the original image. Thank you.

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  • It is standard to begin a sentences with a capital letter. (Your first sentence begins with a lower case letter, so it looks as if something is missing.)
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  • Sentences should be separated with period. In the following two examples, you used a comma.

He has been enslaved and maltreated by the slave traders before he got to the strange land where they worship a mighty dragon,the dragon is their god and they always offer human sacrifices to it, mostly the slaves.
The boy was gentle and meek,he would never disobey anyone no matter how much maltreatment he has been through.

Hopefully these tips help you! Thanks for posting your work in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on other writers' stories. We will curate this one once you provide the source link.

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Hi @strangeverest. Thanks for that. Be sure to provide a link to your image source within your post in the future.

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I'll gladly do so.
And thanks for the correction,I'm so happy to see my mistakes and learn from it.

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