Comments by The Ink Well (@theinkwell) - Neoxian City

The Ink Well

The Ink Well is a @curie curated community supporting short story writers on hive.

about 15 hours ago

What a tragic story. It illustrates that some people are so impulsive and defiant that they can even pay the ultimate sacrifice, as a result. Thanks for sharing your story in…

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about 16 hours ago

Hello @kingobonnaya, This is an intriguing story with excellent character descriptions. We feel we know the father of this family. We certainly believe we know Aunty Ogechi.…

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2 days ago

This story could have gone in so many directions that would have rendered it routine. However, you resisted temptation. For example, Alex could have fallen in love with the…

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2 days ago

Oh no! What a great ending---and also a great beginning. Creative, dramatic use of the prompt, @cool08. You build excitement as the group looks for a way out and then almost gets…

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2 days ago

The first sentence is a good 'hook', @mrenglish. For the umpteenth time, Japheth had tried marriage but it has never worked in his favour We are intrigued by the…

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3 days ago

You did a nice job with the development of this story, and building the characters of the step-siblings through their interactions, @uchihanagato. You have a good handle on…

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3 days ago

Your story has a strong moral and words of caution to people who choose to indulge in parties and drugs instead of walking the straight path and completing school. Thanks for…

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4 days ago

Your story explores the challenges of marriage, commitment, and faithfulness, @raymondpeter. The multiple conflicts create some nice depth and complexity to your story. One small…

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4 days ago

The reaction of many readers (this reader ) will definitely be that there is something wrong with allowing 7-year-olds to have a phone and to have free access to the Internet.…

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5 days ago

When a leader is all about their own importance, and not about the good of the people, it is never a good thing. We see examples of this all over the world, throughout history.

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