RE: Dinosaur Tour

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Oh no! What a great ending---and also a great beginning. Creative, dramatic use of the prompt, @cool08. You build excitement as the group looks for a way out and then almost gets trapped. In the end, when we think they are safe....they are not! Surprise.

Thank you for sharing this suspenseful story with us and also for engaging with other authors in the community.



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