RE: Against All Odds.

A nicely constructed story about a child with big dreams and heaps of passion who, against the odds, and without his parents' support, goes on to make a name for himself in Pickle Ball, and to represent his country at the Olympic Games. There were a few things that weren't explained which make the piece a little difficult to believe eg: how did Wale get his passport and visas without his parents' support? How did his parents' manage to get passports, visas, and tickets for an Olympic Games Final at such short notice and without calling in any favours? While these seem like small details, they are the kind of things that can break the rhythm of a story and pull a reader out of an immersive state. Consider ironing things like these out in future.

Thankyou for writing in The Ink Well.