RE: Five minutes of Introspection

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This is a very powerful story, @jackdeathblack. We don't know why the narrator is sitting there — hyper-aware of the time slowing passing as he contemplates his life and regrets — and that carriers us forward to learn why he is in this circumstance. Is something bad about to happen? Is he contemplating a crime? Ending his life?

But no... the bad thing has already happened. And it's a shocking realization when we come to understand exactly what has befallen him. Well done. A very intense and impactful story.

Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members!



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Thank you very much, this comment is really nice, it makes me want to keep on publishing.

I really had many doubts before my first publication, the rules and tips to follow I felt it was difficult for me to adapt.

Sometimes I just let my imagination fly so I can have a fluid story, only this way I can achieve it. Thank you very much for reading me, and for your appreciated advice that has helped me a lot in the community.

Best regards and happy afternoon.

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